Magical Abilities Claims

Hi Khaat I've cut out the bit about her Grandmother being as good as the Trelawny's and changed it to that she was merely 'trained' under Sybill's great grandmother but never was as recognised or as good as the Trelawnys.
Hope that's better
Thanks

yes. much better. thank you.

added.

Thank you

Name: Isabella Santiago
Age: 30
Ability Desired: Animangus/ Hawk
Level Desired: 2
Training: She trainned with her transfiguration teacher at Beauxbatons, then while she was with the CNI she trainned for the first 2 years with advanced trainners until she was flawless. She started training when she was 18. It took her 3 years to learn.
Brief RP: Iz was feeling energetic. At the CNI her ability was always needed. She was told to spy on various witches and wizards. Because none of the other agents weren't animagusis.
But she was no longer with the CNI. She missed them though. The feeling of always being in the action.
And she did wan't to check the ministry out. Owls flew around there ahe had heard. And a Hawk probabley would be ok...
Iz looked around then quickly changed and flew off. She soon arrived at the ministry. Flying aroynd she got some stares but barely any. Then she saw someone.
She flew then stopped at the door looking at them.
She looked at the door.
Minister of Magic
It read. So this was the minister of magic.
She stared at him then left flying back home then changing back.
This time it was rather pointless.
But maybe later ones wouldn't be.


Name: Isabella Santiago
Age: 30
Ability Desired: Memory Manipulation
Level Desired: Advanced
Training: She trainned with CNI wizarding branch for 5 years then quit. But everyday she trainned learning how to break through hard occlmency sheilds. Well everyday exept 3 kings day easter and christmas. Those were holidays. She trainned with masters in spain and would do it all day when she was not on a assiment. Which was about 7 days a month.
Brief RP: She had Finally tracked down the cultipt. After 3 weeks of solid work Iz had found the murderer. Not the biggist case she had done but a toughie. This guy was a metamorphagus, a wizard, someone with contacts, and multiple identites. But she had found him. This time she wasn't to kill. Only take him in. But if things got too nasty she was to kill. But with a gun. Iz really appreicated muggle methods sometimes.
She knocked on the door making sure her hand was near her bag.
"Hello Sir!" She said happily. "I thought you would like to know you have won the lottery! You will recive 2,000 gallons."
"Gallons? You aren't one of those spammer are you?" He asked, his voice rough.
"Oh no! I am in no way a scammer. I promise you. Now.."
"I've met you somewhere before."
"Maybe at the groccery market. I live around here you know."
"Wait how'd you know I lived here?"
"A friend of yours told us sir."
"I don't remember-"
"Trust me. They did. The wizarding world after all likes to keep track of their citizins sir."
"You're from the CNI. Only they would know that."
"I'm sorry sir. But I do not work with them. As I told you. I am here because you won th-"
"Back away now."
"Sir." I say. "Calm down. We do not want to kill or hurt you. Just serve 5 years. You killed someone by self defense. But you hirt other and used unforgivables. I promise. No dementors. We are spain. Not england."
"Back away now."
"Calm down sir." I take off my sun glasses and look him in the eyes.
Then I run.
...
"Excuse me miss." I say to a young girl. Do you think you could look me in the eyes?" She lifts her head up and stares me straight in the eyes. Then I erase the memory. I do this to about 30 more people getting rid of the memory of the attack and the killing. No wittniss. That's good. No wittniss. No mistakes.
(This is from her past)

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[*] Isabella Santiago ([color=#008aff] Animanigus, Non Verbal Magic, Wandless Magic[/color])

Isabella,

I can live with the animagus, but I really do need you to set some limits on the occlumency. It is somewhat overpowered.

We do like to keep characters' abilities within a reasonable range for their age. At 30, it is unlikely she would be that advanced that she could perform that sort of magic at that high a level and for the prolonged period that you suggest in your request. No wizard would have that much power to be able to erase the memories of that many people alone, and certainly without the use of a wand.

The problem with having such advanced skills is that, while it sounds really fun to be so powerful, it really sharply limits your rp'ing possibilities b/c it makes your character untouchable in so many ways. It might be a nice fantasy, but in an rp, its a bit impractical if you want to really have fun with your character.

Having a character that has as many vulnerabilities as they do strengths makes your character more well rounded and more fun, not just for you but for other people to interact with.

Ok!

Can I reaply for this one?

Name: Isabella Santiago
Age: 30
Ability Desired: Animangus/ Hawk
Level Desired: 2
Training: She trainned with her transfiguration teacher at Beauxbatons, then while she was with the CNI she trainned for the first 2 years with advanced trainners until she was flawless. She started training when she was 18. It took her 3 years to learn.
Brief RP: Iz was feeling energetic. At the CNI her ability was always needed. She was told to spy on various witches and wizards. Because none of the other agents weren't animagusis.
But she was no longer with the CNI. She missed them though. The feeling of always being in the action.
And she did wan't to check the ministry out. Owls flew around there ahe had heard. And a Hawk probabley would be ok...
Iz looked around then quickly changed and flew off. She soon arrived at the ministry. Flying aroynd she got some stares but barely any. Then she saw someone.
She flew then stopped at the door looking at them.
She looked at the door.
Minister of Magic
It read. So this was the minister of magic.
She stared at him then left flying back home then changing back.
This time it was rather pointless.
But maybe later ones wouldn't be.

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[*] Isabella Santiago ([color=#008aff] Animanigus, Non Verbal Magic, Wandless Magic[/color]

alright. i'll accept it. adding!

[*]Alexander Nott (Apparition, Nonverbal Magic)