GunShade: SpartanWizard awakening

[This is my book about my character so yeah.]

Prolouge:
Adrenn Adalay Thompson was breathing softly as he was laying in his hammock. He was dreaming. He dreamt that he was in a plane where there was no hope, no happiness, no air. He breathed heavily and he scoped the area. He saw nothing but mist everywhere. He felt like he was trapped in his own mind. He looked once again and he saw a flying creature coming toward him. He saw it was an Eagle and that it was 5 times bigger than a real one.
He started sprinting and he kept going until he headed towards an edge. It was the end of his dream. He looked behind and he saw that the Eagle was transforming into a hooded man. He looked through the hood to see that the face was deeply gray with red slitted eyes. He looked excatly like a snake. Spartan satred backing and he fell of the platform. He landed hard on another one and there was no mist at all. Just darkness.
He got up groaning and saw that the hooded figure was right there behind him. Adrenn jumpped and he fell onto his back. He felt himself dying as the figure got closer. The figure got so close to him he heardsomething."You are the one!" and Adrenn awoke sweat pouncing his pajamas. He sat up and threw his blanet off the hammock and the blanket hit the floor with a thump. His face was full of his own sweat and he felt his breathing out of controll. No more Coca-Cola before bed he thought. He jumped out of his bed and he turned the TV on. He was 11 and that seemed like an adult nightmare.
He switched it to the news and it said 4 A.M.. He began watching the news and saw that someone had been murded and no signs of life had been on the premises.

"According to the hotel of Sandy Oaks all the guests had been check into the bed
and no one could have gotten in or out consdering the mass murderings around the
area. The couple was a newly wed and their names were Mr. and Mrs. Eugene Thompson..."

Adrenn froze. Those were his aunt and uncle. He turned the volume up.

"....no evidence was found at the scene of the crime and the doors and windows was locked so no one could have gotten in.
After the authoites and the surgeons check the bodies they were healtheiset they could be
so there was no heart attack involved. If you have any leads please contact 1-800-232-5464. Thank you"

Awesome, Adrenn keep writing more. I guess i'll read it if you write more..

That is an awesome story Adrenn! Write more, I will be sure to check it out when it's finished!

Thats really good Adrenn keepit up! I liked the part where he found out about that death.

Ya i liked it too. Write more quick... its been like 10 days

Chapter 1:
SpartanWizard

Adrenn got up in shok and he sat on his hammock. He seemed like he was rying cause he knew his uncle more than he knew his adopted dad since he was always in different countries of the war. He went into his closet and chaneged in his his regualr lothes anyone would: a T-shirt and some jeans. He heard his mother knock on his door. "Adrenn areyou awake?" she whispered through the door. "Yes mom" he replied opening the door. "So you heard?" she said. Adrenn felt his throat curl. He felt his windpipe could make a sound. "Yes" was all he could say. His mother held him as Adrenn fought hard to hold back tears. He thought to himself a happy thought and the curl unwided. "Are you okay?" she said. "Yes" he said rubbing the hot tears going down his face.
After the convorsation of what happened and how his mother ould help him he went back into his room and he sat on his hammock. He coudln't believe that the closet thng to his dad who was in the Army is dead. He held back tearswith hard resistane and held out in the end. His throat was burning immensly and his eyes burning too. He grabbed a framed photo of him, his mother, and his father. He missed him. He lyed back down on his hammock and tried to fall alseep. Until he heard a huge crack and thump againt the window. He flung himself out of his hammock andexmanined his window. At least a 5 foot Eagle Owl perched on the windowsill and it seemed he pecked the window til it cracked. Adrenn checked the time and it was 5
Adrenn opened the window and the Eagle owl soared through the room and pershed itself on his Tv. Adrenn examined the large bird and saw a piece of paper atacthed to the owls leg. He grabbed the parchment and it read something. It was adressed from hogwarts school of witchcraft and wizadry. It was adressed to 'The house in the middle of nowhere'. Adrenn felt quite shocked. He unfolded the piece of parchment and it was damp. It showed the invitaion letter and the school supply list. He felt cofused. He went down downstairs and he saw his mother looking at the paper. "Mum" he said "I got this strange letter. From some Hogzits or something." The mother grabbed the damp parchment and read it. "I see the time as come SpartanWizard" she said

To be continued...

Cool. Altho why does his mom call him spartanwiz? she shuld call him Adrenn

I was trying to make it seem like he would be confused kind of like a cliff hanger.

oh ok i get it

if this is a made up story can u include me in it

Yeah sure do you want to be the Malfoy or a friend? Cause I cant eexacly decide