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Out of Character:
Name:angie
Gender: female
Age: 16
How you found Potter's Army: internet
Any other characters on Potter's Army:
Anything else: ambition

In Character

Name: Angela Malfoy
Nicknames: angie
Gender: female
Race: Human
Year AND Age: 11 first year
Preferred houses: slytherin , ravenclaw
Birthday: february 23
Canon or Original:original
Play-by: angela
Blood Status: Pureblood

Height: 5'4
Hair: brown, straight then wavy
Eye colour: dark brown
Skin: tan
Other distinguishing features: no body's perfect.

Personality: angie has alot of ambition. when i want something i would get it.
Skills: potions,charms,dark arts
Weaknesses: lost of parents
Likes: always Know it all. Even when you don't, you can make it sound like you do.
Dislikes: loud people
Motto: its all in how you think of it
Family Information: parents have died. no one left but I.
Background: Changed last name to malfoy.
Short Roleplay: I walked through the dark, dingy alleys which surrounded my house, and finally arrived at the Dark Lord's mansion. It is a giant, black castle surrounded by the deserted, purple moor. There is always a light mist around it. There he was the dark lord.

Good app, can you alter a couple of things first though?
Just add a bit more to personality, character traits and such (ambitious is one, yes, but is she stubborn, generous, have a bad temper, forgiving, what?). You need three for weaknesses, dislikes and likes (explain lost parents and your like(s) confused me).
Only other thing, you have the surname Malfoy, can you please explain how you are related to the family in family information. Even if all your family are dead, can you say who they were before they died & describe how you're related to the known canon family (Lucius, Draco & his kids).

Out of Character:
Name:angie
Gender: female
Age: 16
How you found Potter's Army: internet
Any other characters on Potter's Army:
Anything else: ambition, always Know it all. Even when i don't, i can make it sound like i do.

In Character

Name: Angela Malfoy
Nicknames: angie
Gender: female
Race: Human
Year AND Age: 11 first year
Preferred houses: slytherin , ravenclaw
Birthday: february 23
Canon or Original:original
Play-by: angela
Blood Status: Pureblood

Height: 5'4
Hair: brown, straight then wavy
Eye colour: dark brown
Skin: tan
Other distinguishing features: no body's perfect.

Personality: angie has alot of ambition. when i want something i would get it.
Skills: potions,charms,dark arts
Weaknesses: lost of parents(doesn't really like to talk about it.they were part of the dark lords iner circle. got killed by enemies of the dark lord), could never kill unless need it to, hard time admiting things
Likes: like flying, potions, myself
Dislikes: loud people, the Marauders, fakeness
Motto: its all in how you think of it
Family Information: parents have died. no one left but I.
Background:angie was adopted by Scorpius Hyperion Malfoy who is The only child of Draco and Astoria Malfoy
Short Roleplay: I walked through the dark, dingy alleys which surrounded my house, and finally arrived at the Dark Lord's mansion. It is a giant, black castle surrounded by the deserted, purple moor. There is always a light mist around it. There he was the dark lord.

Scorpius Hyperion Malfoy is 15 years old.
So I am sorry, you have to choose ano-
ther nickname. We are not accepting Ori-
ginals with major Canon surnames. Ok?