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Welcome to Potter's Army

We have been a Harry Potter Roleplaying site since 2007. If you're an old member we hope you come check out the discord link provided below. And if you're looking for a new roleplaying site, well, we're a little inactive. But every once and a while nostalgia sets in and a few of our alumni members will revisit the old stomping grounds and post together. Remember to stay safe out there. And please feel free to drop a line whenever!

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Since every few months or so a few of our old members get the inspiration to revisit their old stomping grounds we have decided to keep PA open as a place to revisit old threads and start new ones devoid of any serious overarching plot or setting. Take this time to start any of those really weird threads you never got to make with old friends and make them now! Just remember to come say hello in the chatbox below or in the discord. Links have been provided in the "Comings and Goings" forum as well as the welcome widget above.


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Post by Khaat Lupin Sat Apr 21, 2012 2:24 am

alrighty!
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Post by Elijah Krum Sat Apr 21, 2012 10:43 am

May I suggest you move away from portraying the character similarly to how Cassie was? Make her her own person, don't just take Cassie out of Skins and put her on PA. You could use her as a model, I suppose, just give her more substance. Uhm. And not drugs. As in character, I meant..erm.. *walks away awkwardly*

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Post by Kaede Lynn Sun Apr 22, 2012 10:01 pm

lol, its done now Smile
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Post by Jess Potter Mon Apr 23, 2012 12:32 am

Righto, I'll read over it now for you.
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Post by Jess Potter Mon Apr 23, 2012 12:45 am

Mmmkay, so just some little things that popped out to me.
1. She's only 16, so she can't be an Auror, I'm afraid, not until she's a graduate
2. How old was her sister when she died? That's important for me to know
3. If her sister went to Hogwarts with her, it would be fairly difficult to keep her as a secret, as ghosts can't turn invisible or visible at will in the HP universe.
4. I wouldn't have said anything, but as long as you're already making changes, is there any chance that you could include some dialogue in your RP sample?

Otherwise I do like the look of the character. Based on personality I'm more inclined to think Ravenclaw, I think, because of her likes, and because of her perceptive nature, would you agree with that?
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Post by Kaede Lynn Tue May 08, 2012 12:48 pm

Finished-
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Post by Elijah Krum Fri May 11, 2012 3:07 pm

Alright! We've held you up long enough but she looks ready to go! Have fun rp-ing!

Accepted and sorted into Hufflepuff!

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