Magical Abilities Claiming

Andrew: Stop leaving then
Gabriella: Doesn't cut it. Metamorphii learn it as children, it doesn't just happen during a crisis, she would have had earlier symptoms.
And even if Gabrielle doesn't know, you need to explain how it happened. Try something like "Gabrielle doesn't know, however her grandmother blah blah blah" Apparation is accepted though.
Aurora: I've never heard of a muggle born seer, tbh.
Same as above, I might be willing to accept it, but you need to explain how it happened, even if Aurora doesn't know, you should have an idea.

James: All good.

For those accepted things, I've added them to your character sheets.

Name: Jake Collins
Age: 17
Tier: Not sure
Ability Desired: Appariation
A Detailed History Behind Said Ability: Ever since Jake was little he wanted to apparate. During his 6th year, Jake learned about Apparation and became very interested in it. He knew it would come in handy if he learned it, so he began to try and learn it. He finally learned it and he passed the apparation test.

Name: Hermione Weasley
Age: 44
Tier: 1 or 2
Ability Desired: Memory Manipulation
A Detailed History Behind Said Ability: Canon at the beginning of Deathly Hallows.

Name: Jaden Jamison
Age: 17
Tier: 1st? I don’t know what ever a 7th year would be. It doesn’t say where it dose on others.
Ability Desired: Metamorphagus and Empathy
A Detailed History Behind Said Ability:
Metamorphagus--- Jaden doesn’t use this ability much but he did when he was a young child before learning to control it. His mother’s grathe grandmother (didn’t look up her name on the family tree) on her fathers side had been a metamorphous and his parents had hoped that none of their children would inharit it seeing as their closest naighbor’s are muggles though their house is a mile or so down the road for their house. Jaden was one year old when his parents discuved he haid this ability. Every thing had been normal and he and his brothers where jus sitting there in their highchairs as his mother cooked dinner waiting for their father to return. Their mother tured around when Raymond and Dylan started giggling and claping . They where both looking Jaden who’s normaly whispy blonde hair was now a bight red. Jaden was the first Jamison to have this ability since it came from the Kingsley side of the family.

Empathy-- this ability Jaden gets from his grate grate grate grate grandpa Jeff on his Fathers side. It is said that jeff was the first was the first in the Jamison son line to have this ability haven’t gotten it from his mother and not his father. Jaden is the 3rd to have this ability since Jeff had two or three kids who had kids of their own who had kids who had this ability. Most people didn’t relize Jaden had this ability until Brynn and Hugo where born and he seemed to know when they where upset. They just hadn’t noticed it when the girls had been born.

Jaden-

7th years are not tiered, and they are certainly not tier 1. That's Grindelwald status.

2nd, you do realize that by claiming those abilities he will only be able to claim nonverbal magic or apparation, not both, and both become rather important. Nonverbal is pretty much required for NEWTs and apparation is really too useful to go without.

Honestly, these need to be developed and expanded a lot more before they can be accepted. I also suggest you spend some time developing him- he still is new- so that you can decide whether or not you like those choices.

By the way, it's 'great' not 'grate'. We're trying to cut back on continuous misspellings and grammar mistakes.

Okay i'll work on it some more.. and i really wasn't sure about the tier thing.. though if i do end up claiming either of them it will be metamorphagus..

Name: Jaquellene "Jack" Dyllan
Age: 18
Tier: n/a
Ability Desired: Nonverbal Magic, Apparation, Empathy
A Detailed History Behind Said Ability: Noverbal and apparation are learned abilites from Hogwarts.

Empathy- When Jack was preparing to leave for Hogwarts, for the first time in her life she was actually happy- having always been sort of a brooding character as she was sort of a bitter outcast from family, school, neighborhood kids, etc. About a month before she was preparing to leave, her family pulled the rug from under her and told her that she was a freak, she would not be attending, and they planned on sending her off for psychiatric help.

Needless to say, a lot of negative emotions hit Jack, flaring her already rather unstable emotional state, progressing the spiteful, negative, bitter young girl to become even more so. Little did she know, she released enough negative and destructive energy to creat a poltergeist that would take on the name of Vito Dee Symons. Jack never realized she created him at the time, nor did Vito know who his creator was.

Jack eventually got to Hogwarts with the help of her rich uncle and she lived a fairly normal life at first. She was unaware of the connection she had to Vito, but that no doubt was what brought them together in theur first meeting that led them to become rivals, always claiming to dislike the other, yet still inexplicably drawn to each other.

The releasing of emotions is a strange spiritual thing and it planted a seed in Jack- whether or not she was aware of it or in control of it, she could connect to Vito's emotions, as could he- hence, when one was moody, they were a disatrous pair. Soon, this connection manifested into the capability to sense and recognize emotion, regardless of who or where. Jack is by nature rude abd tough, but her mind was always sensitive to the feelings of those in great distress (not to say she was, but her psyche was.)

In the summer she turned seventeen, thing began to take s our turn with Vito and emotions ran high. That seed really began to sprout then. She began to have what she thought was an unlucky yet impeccable sense for being drawn to a person in need, though what she failed to realize was that this was an ability not some sort of fluke.

The first instance where it happened, she was drawn to Chase Moor being attacked by Vito. Emotions ran incredibly high and he attempted to kill her. With his failure, she began to become more in tune with Chase's and Vito's feelings, which she assumed came from the shared experience. When the summer party rolled around, destroying Jack's temporary mental/psychological state was sent to shambles, making her even more painstaking aware of the emotions of others.

The next time she aided someone it was the injured Elijah Krum and Dominuc Ravenquist-Marino. Again when she found Ariel Greyback in the hospital wing in a sorry state. Again, when Chase escaped felix Barker, snf then when Jack found Thaor attempting suicide.

Because of her strange development of Empathy, it is not the pure ability in that all emotions are felt at anuy desired time. Her abilites come into play when there is someone of great distress that could be helped because of her. When someone close to her is full of terrible anguish, she feels as though her own livilihood has been destroyed, the happiness of those closest to is the only way she can get peace. Her ability to sense the emotions and read them, rather than being pulled to the source are just beginning to develop- she could sense Thaor's anguish the second she looked at him, though he managed to fake his way well.

For now, she does not know she had the ability nor does she understand its control. It affects her by drawing her towards tortured souls, those in pain, and being able to sense hidden emotions that could possibly be destructive. It's as if when she created Vito, the universe gave her the tools to make sure no one else made the same 'mistake' though she does not know she would call it that. Jacck best senses people closest to her, but the people closest to her are the ones who drew her in in the first place. If Jack feels your anguish, she often feels as later there is abond between you two and she can not help but try and secure your happiness if only for her sanity.

Name: Anthony "Spike" James
Age: 25
Tier: Not given to me yet
Ability Desired: Empathy
A Detailed History Behind Said Ability: He inherited the ability from his fathers side of the family, his great-great-great grand mother had the ability. It was to much for her and it killed her, but everyone thought that it was just a heart attack. She never told anyone about having the ability, and that is why no one knows where he got the ability. The first time that he ever found out that he had this ability, he was in his second year at Hogwarts. It was a holiday, he was in the Great Hall eating. He felt a lot of emotions all at once, then his head started to hurt. He felt like his heart was going to explode from the pounding. Then he passed out. They took him to the hospital wing, there they told him that he was an empathy after questioning him. They told him that he would have to stay away from people more until he had a better handle over his ability. Ever since then he has been using it. But lately he wishes he never got it.

Jake: No worries, accepted
Hermione: Again, not a problem.
Jaden: I didn't see any resolution to your issue so I'm not accepting it yet until you make the improvements Jack's already mentioned.
Jack: Accepted
Anthony: Just a little more on the family side of things. Even if Anthony doesn't know how he received the abilities, you should as his writer, so just clarify that and it should be fine.
Ne'os: Wandless magic, yes, however the flying... it was a little unclear... You sorta made it seem as if he'd have the ability to fly, however then you said that he didn't due to the lack of additional vampire power.
I'm also reluctant to allow two really advanced pieces of magic... I mean, in the books the only two people who learned how to fly were Voldemort and Snape, and the latter was only through voldemort's tuition. I suppose Quirrell did took, but that was only through his shared soul with Voldemort.
That and you already have invisibility, so you're really, really pushing your luck here.
Care to change anything before I add Wandless?