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Franklin, Desiree
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Franklin, Desiree
FULL NAME: Desiree Annabel Franklin
NICKNAMES: Desi
AGE: 11
ALLEGIANCE: Good
HOGWARTS HOUSE: Gryffindor, Ravenclaw
CLASSES: Charms, Transfiguration, Potions
WAND: Ash, Dragon Heartstring, 10 inches, yeilding
PLAY BY: Mackenzie Foy
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APPEARANCE
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HAIR COLOUR: Long, curly, red
EYE COLOUR: big, brown, expressive
COMPARATIVE HEIGHT: Short
BODY BUILD: Thin
GENERAL APPEARANCE: Desi has long red hair that is rather curly, big brown eyes that make you like her usually, but she is short and thin for her age.
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PERSONALITY
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TRAITS: Sweet, brave, naive, very studious, easily fooled, bad at lying, and sometimes forgets important things.
LIKES & DISLIKES: Hates: frogs, spiders. Likes: Reading, writing, drawing
GOALS: To graduate Hogwarts and become a newspaper reporter or a author
HABITS & QUIRKS: Reading, drawing. When she's scared, she bites her lip or tugs her ear.
BOGGART: Seeing a friend die
PATRONUS: (Jaguar) When she met her best friend.
DEMENTOR: Her mother died when she was eight
VERITASERUM: Her best Muggle friend told her her crush
MIRROR OF ERISED: To have her mother back
PERSONALITY: Desi is rather forgetful, sometimes forgetting her homework and important events. She is easily tricked and very naive. She would probably be scared of the thestrals at first.
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FAMILY & POSSESSIONS
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FATHER: Jerry Franklin
MOTHER: Sara Franklin(nee Harrison, deceased)
SIBLING/S: Gina Franklin, age 7, Penny Franklin, age 3
OTHER: Best Friend/sister: Faith Sanders
BLOOD STATUS: Half-blood
SPECIES: Human
SOCIAL STATUS: Middle
PET/S: Owl, Barn, Jessy. Cat, Persian, Hanna
OTHER POSSESSIONS: Desi owns a necklace with rubies on it that her mother gave her, and she wears it all the time.
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CHARACTER HISTORY
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Early Years: When Desi was eight, she watched her mother die. As such, this is her worst memory. She was very depressed for about a year as a result, not even Gina could get her out of it, and then went to her bubbly and smart self. She got her Hogwarts letter the day after she turned eleven, and she was very happy, almost ready to get over her mother. She had several friends in her Muggle school, but she couldn't tell them about it. She could barely resist for the last few weeks of the school year, but managed.
Hogwarts Years: Desi made friends with everyone in Ravenclaw and Gryffindor, and a few Hufflepuffs are her friends. She does what she can to help out, but since she's so young, not many pay attention to her. She would like to try out for the Quidditch team maybe in second year.
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BEHIND THE CHARACTER
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ALSO KNOWN AS: Leia Elkins!(that's me!)
RP EXPERIENCE: Barely any.
HOW YOU FOUND US: HP Wiki page
MAIN CHARACTER: Desi
PURPOSE OF CHARACTER: Student of Hogwarts
RP SAMPLE: As I entered the castle after the nerve-wracking boat ride, my excitement mounted. I was about to be Sorted. My dad told me that Gryffindor was the best, but I really wnted to be in Ravenclaw. Oh well. It doesn't matter. I smile at several of the others, and some of them give me dirty looks. Huh.
NICKNAMES: Desi
AGE: 11
ALLEGIANCE: Good
HOGWARTS HOUSE: Gryffindor, Ravenclaw
CLASSES: Charms, Transfiguration, Potions
WAND: Ash, Dragon Heartstring, 10 inches, yeilding
PLAY BY: Mackenzie Foy
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APPEARANCE
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HAIR COLOUR: Long, curly, red
EYE COLOUR: big, brown, expressive
COMPARATIVE HEIGHT: Short
BODY BUILD: Thin
GENERAL APPEARANCE: Desi has long red hair that is rather curly, big brown eyes that make you like her usually, but she is short and thin for her age.
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PERSONALITY
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TRAITS: Sweet, brave, naive, very studious, easily fooled, bad at lying, and sometimes forgets important things.
LIKES & DISLIKES: Hates: frogs, spiders. Likes: Reading, writing, drawing
GOALS: To graduate Hogwarts and become a newspaper reporter or a author
HABITS & QUIRKS: Reading, drawing. When she's scared, she bites her lip or tugs her ear.
BOGGART: Seeing a friend die
PATRONUS: (Jaguar) When she met her best friend.
DEMENTOR: Her mother died when she was eight
VERITASERUM: Her best Muggle friend told her her crush
MIRROR OF ERISED: To have her mother back
PERSONALITY: Desi is rather forgetful, sometimes forgetting her homework and important events. She is easily tricked and very naive. She would probably be scared of the thestrals at first.
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FAMILY & POSSESSIONS
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FATHER: Jerry Franklin
MOTHER: Sara Franklin(nee Harrison, deceased)
SIBLING/S: Gina Franklin, age 7, Penny Franklin, age 3
OTHER: Best Friend/sister: Faith Sanders
BLOOD STATUS: Half-blood
SPECIES: Human
SOCIAL STATUS: Middle
PET/S: Owl, Barn, Jessy. Cat, Persian, Hanna
OTHER POSSESSIONS: Desi owns a necklace with rubies on it that her mother gave her, and she wears it all the time.
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CHARACTER HISTORY
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Early Years: When Desi was eight, she watched her mother die. As such, this is her worst memory. She was very depressed for about a year as a result, not even Gina could get her out of it, and then went to her bubbly and smart self. She got her Hogwarts letter the day after she turned eleven, and she was very happy, almost ready to get over her mother. She had several friends in her Muggle school, but she couldn't tell them about it. She could barely resist for the last few weeks of the school year, but managed.
Hogwarts Years: Desi made friends with everyone in Ravenclaw and Gryffindor, and a few Hufflepuffs are her friends. She does what she can to help out, but since she's so young, not many pay attention to her. She would like to try out for the Quidditch team maybe in second year.
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BEHIND THE CHARACTER
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ALSO KNOWN AS: Leia Elkins!(that's me!)
RP EXPERIENCE: Barely any.
HOW YOU FOUND US: HP Wiki page
MAIN CHARACTER: Desi
PURPOSE OF CHARACTER: Student of Hogwarts
RP SAMPLE: As I entered the castle after the nerve-wracking boat ride, my excitement mounted. I was about to be Sorted. My dad told me that Gryffindor was the best, but I really wnted to be in Ravenclaw. Oh well. It doesn't matter. I smile at several of the others, and some of them give me dirty looks. Huh.
Last edited by Leia Ivy on Thu Apr 17, 2014 2:26 pm; edited 1 time in total
Leia Ivy- Number of posts : 2
Re: Franklin, Desiree
Hello, welcome to PA!
There are a few things that need to be changed first before we're finished.
- Can you please put the app back into its proper template, please?
- Add more detail to general appearance.
- Add more traits to flesh her out.
- Fill in the general personality section.
- Add more detail to her early history - you can delete her adulthood as she is only eleven.
Also, we roleplay here in third person past tense so you'll have to adjust the sample.
- Thanks.
There are a few things that need to be changed first before we're finished.
- Can you please put the app back into its proper template, please?
- Add more detail to general appearance.
- Add more traits to flesh her out.
- Fill in the general personality section.
- Add more detail to her early history - you can delete her adulthood as she is only eleven.
Also, we roleplay here in third person past tense so you'll have to adjust the sample.
- Thanks.
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Elijah Krum- Sixth Year Slytherin
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Special Abilities : Occlumens, Parseltongue, Animagus
Occupation : Owner of Eli's Fine Dining, Artist, Deputy Minister of Magic
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