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Post by Leia Ivy on Wed Apr 16, 2014 5:27 pm

FULL NAME: Desiree Annabel Franklin

NICKNAMES: Desi

AGE: 11

ALLEGIANCE: Good

HOGWARTS HOUSE: Gryffindor, Ravenclaw

CLASSES: Charms, Transfiguration, Potions

WAND: Ash, Dragon Heartstring, 10 inches, yeilding

PLAY BY: Mackenzie Foy



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APPEARANCE
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HAIR COLOUR: Long, curly, red

EYE COLOUR: big, brown, expressive

COMPARATIVE HEIGHT: Short

BODY BUILD: Thin

GENERAL APPEARANCE: Desi has long red hair that is rather curly, big brown eyes that make you like her usually, but she is short and thin for her age.



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PERSONALITY
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TRAITS: Sweet, brave, naive, very studious, easily fooled, bad at lying, and sometimes forgets important things.

LIKES & DISLIKES: Hates: frogs, spiders. Likes: Reading, writing, drawing

GOALS: To graduate Hogwarts and become a newspaper reporter or a author

HABITS & QUIRKS: Reading, drawing. When she's scared, she bites her lip or tugs her ear.

BOGGART: Seeing a friend die

PATRONUS: (Jaguar) When she met her best friend.

DEMENTOR: Her mother died when she was eight

VERITASERUM: Her best Muggle friend told her her crush

MIRROR OF ERISED: To have her mother back

PERSONALITY: Desi is rather forgetful, sometimes forgetting her homework and important events. She is easily tricked and very naive. She would probably be scared of the thestrals at first.


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FAMILY & POSSESSIONS
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FATHER: Jerry Franklin

MOTHER: Sara Franklin(nee Harrison, deceased)

SIBLING/S: Gina Franklin, age 7, Penny Franklin, age 3

OTHER: Best Friend/sister: Faith Sanders

BLOOD STATUS: Half-blood

SPECIES: Human

SOCIAL STATUS: Middle

PET/S: Owl, Barn, Jessy. Cat, Persian, Hanna

OTHER POSSESSIONS: Desi owns a necklace with rubies on it that her mother gave her, and she wears it all the time.


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CHARACTER HISTORY
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Early Years: When Desi was eight, she watched her mother die. As such, this is her worst memory. She was very depressed for about a year as a result, not even Gina could get her out of it, and then went to her bubbly and smart self. She got her Hogwarts letter the day after she turned eleven, and she was very happy, almost ready to get over her mother. She had several friends in her Muggle school, but she couldn't tell them about it. She could barely resist for the last few weeks of the school year, but managed.

Hogwarts Years: Desi made friends with everyone in Ravenclaw and Gryffindor, and a few Hufflepuffs are her friends. She does what she can to help out, but since she's so young, not many pay attention to her. She would like to try out for the Quidditch team maybe in second year.


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BEHIND THE CHARACTER
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ALSO KNOWN AS: Leia Elkins!(that's me!)

RP EXPERIENCE: Barely any.

HOW YOU FOUND US: HP Wiki page

MAIN CHARACTER: Desi

PURPOSE OF CHARACTER: Student of Hogwarts

RP SAMPLE: As I entered the castle after the nerve-wracking boat ride, my excitement mounted. I was about to be Sorted. My dad told me that Gryffindor was the best, but I really wnted to be in Ravenclaw. Oh well. It doesn't matter. I smile at several of the others, and some of them give me dirty looks. Huh.


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Post by Elijah Krum on Wed Apr 16, 2014 8:59 pm

Hello, welcome to PA!

There are a few things that need to be changed first before we're finished.

- Can you please put the app back into its proper template, please?
- Add more detail to general appearance.
- Add more traits to flesh her out.
- Fill in the general personality section.
- Add more detail to her early history - you can delete her adulthood as she is only eleven.

Also, we roleplay here in third person past tense so you'll have to adjust the sample.

- Thanks.

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Post by Anabelle Mulciber on Thu May 01, 2014 10:24 am

Moving to graveyard.
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