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Post by Jordan Westfield on Mon Aug 26, 2013 4:58 pm

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JORDAN LAZARUS WESTFIELD
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INTRODUCTION
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    FULL NAME: Jordan Lazarus Westfield

    NICKNAMES: Jay, Dark, Westfield

    AGE: 16

    ALLEGIANCE: Potter's Army

    HOGWARTS HOUSE: Ravenclaw or Gryffindor

    CLASSES: All NEWT

    WAND: Dogwood, unicorn hair, 12 1/2 inches, flexible

    PLAY BY: Donald Glover


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APPEARANCE
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    HAIR COLOUR: Jet Black

    EYE COLOUR: Dark Brown

    COMPARATIVE HEIGHT: Tall

    BODY BUILD: Athletic

    GENERAL APPEARANCE: Jordan describes himself as "Tall, Dark, and Handsome" He has a pretty athletic build, with how many times he works out and does sports. He has curly black and nappy hair, that is shaped somewhat like a medium or short afro. He stands at 6'1 one, which is a good thing, since he is still growing. Racially he is African, and from there, but was adopted by another wizard family.


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PERSONALITY
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    STRENGTHS & WEAKNESSES:
    Strengths:
    Sports and Music
    Humor and Fun-Loving
    Somewhat above average of intelligence
    Good combat fighter, both with wand and without.
    And able to Free-Run
    Brave enough to do most things people wouldn't.

    Weaknesses:
    Although intelligent, he can also be very dimwitted.
    A bit paranoid at times
    Very willing to stand up for what he believes in.
    Does not like to be out done, and always likes to believe he is the best.
    Doesn't really say "No" when a person asks him to do something, because he wants people to like him.
    He would also do anything for a person who is family, or friends. Even if it means his life on the line.


    LIKES & DISLIKES:
    Likes:
    Sports, Martial Arts, and Free Running.
    Making Music, writing, and at times acting.
    Being better than most people
    Dueling, and winning.
    Being Funny

    Dislikes:
    Being out done.
    Forgetting things.
    When people laugh at him.
    People asking him if he is adopted, because it is obvious.


    GOALS:
    To be a professional Quidditch Player
    If not that, he would like to be an Auror.

    HABITS & QUIRKS:
    Biting his nails
    Sort of Dimwitted, and being funny when not meaning to be.

    BOGGART: Death Eaters, because with the cloaks and everything, he is sure that was what had killed his parents when he was eight.

    PATRONUS: When he went to France with his new family, and started Free Running with people he saw on the street. So to symbolize the speed, it's a Cheetah.

    DEMENTOR: Being hidden in a panic room by his mom, and witnessing his parents death.

    VERITASERUM: That he is a son of the Underbride's. When he was adopted, he took his adopted families last name. Just in case the killers of his family ever come back to finish the job.

    MIRROR OF ERISED: To play for Puddlemere United one day. Any Quidditch team really, he just prefers Puddlemere.

    PERSONALITY: Jordan is sports crazed, music loving, humorous, Alpha Male. Jordan loves any type of sport really, except crickets. From Muggle sports like Football (european) to Basketball, parkour, or track, and Wizard Sports like Quidditch, the guy loves it. He is a pretty smart kid who can be a bit of an airhead some times, and notices things some people don't, and it makes some people think he is either a stalker, or an idiot. He is fun, and loves to party and be funny, and is very friendly. But when crossed, he can have a really short temper. He likes to be an Alpha male, because he doesn't like being worse than anyone. He has the courage to stand up to people stronger than him, just to help others.

    Jordan can be forgetful at times and he hates that. He hates when a person makes fun or ridicules him for his color, height, or the fact that he is adopted. Behind the fun exterior he has, he is also a bit scarred, witnessing the violent murder of his family.

    Ever since his biological parents death, he has harbored a hate for things he thinks are Evil and such. He would stand up to any murderer, bully, or even authority if they insult what he believes in.


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FAMILY & POSSESSIONS
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    FATHER: Biological- Marcellus Underbride, Auror (Deceased)
    Adoptive- Frank Westfield, Wizard, but works in the muggle world.

    MOTHER: Biological- Angela Underbrige, Nurse (deceased)
    Adoptive- Ursula Westfield, Auror.

    SIBLING/S: Adoptive Brother- Michael Westfield, Quidditch Player for Falmouth Falcons
    Adoptive Sister- Jennifer Westfield, Fifth Year

    OTHER: Uncle who is still alive, Merice Underbride

    BLOOD STATUS:  Halfblood

    RACE: Human

    SOCIAL STATUS: Wealthy

    PET/S:
    Owl named Petro

    OTHER POSSESSIONS:
    None


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CHARACTER HISTORY
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    Early Years: Jordan grew up in sort of a above middle class, but below Wealthy. He had a fairly happy childhood, his family didn't spoil him, but they treated him good. His dad was the closest with Jordan, as Jordan found himself interested in the same things. When he was around five, his dad took him to see the Final of the Champions League, and then later that week the Quidditch European League final.
    But that soon ended when he was seven, as one cold winter night neared. Around late at night, their doors blew open and three people apparated in their house. At the first time, Jordan didn't realize what these people were, who they were. But before they could get to him, his mother hid him in a panic room, that could only be opened from the inside, unless you had a pass key. His mother went back to go help out his father in fighting. After Wizard authorities found him, at the same age of seven, he was adopted by another Wizarding Family. He was forced to take his adopted families name, so his parents killers couldn't find out he was alive, and so they couldn't finish the job.

    Hogwarts Years: It took a few years of getting used to, especially after what Jordan lived through. But after a few years of getting used to it, he started to trust and love his new family. Around the age of eleven, his adoptive parents had started to think he was a Squib, until he had accidentally made leaves fly. The thing was he had never tried or even though about doing stuff like that, so he had never showed any signs of magic. He was sent to Hogwarts, and there he has been ever since. Excelling at Defense Against the Dark arts and dueling, which were part of his favorite Wizarding activies, apart from Quidditch.

    Adulthood: None



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BEHIND THE CHARACTER
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    ALSO KNOWN AS: Kelvin (Formerly Louis)

    RP EXPERIENCE: 4 years

    HOW YOU FOUND US: Because I have been on this site for a long time.

    MAIN CHARACTER: Alexander Jones

    PURPOSE OF CHARACTER: Adding to Potters Army, and because I want to bring more of a character like me into PA

    RP SAMPLE:
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    At least one paragraph. You can skip if you have another character



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Post by Jordan Westfield on Mon Aug 26, 2013 11:38 pm

Done
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Post by Anabelle Mulciber on Tue Aug 27, 2013 5:16 pm

Hey,

You have a good app. But he doesn't exactly seem to be a Ravenclaw or Gryffindor to me. He stands out more as a Hufflepuff. If you want him to be a Ravenclaw or Gryffindor add some traits from those houses please, depending on what house you want of course.

Other than that, he actually seems good to go.

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Post by Jordan Westfield on Tue Aug 27, 2013 7:13 pm

I guess I added a couple new things, but he seemed like somewhat Ravenclaw and/or Gryffindor to me. The fact that he is above average of intelligence is for Ravenclaw sort of I guess. Or the fact that he is willing to stand up for what he believes is right, and stand up for other people seems Gryffindor to me.
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Post by Jamie Griggory on Tue Aug 27, 2013 7:35 pm

If he is a ravenclaw we could already be friends
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Post by Jordan Westfield on Tue Aug 27, 2013 7:57 pm

Yeah, if he was a ravenclaw that would be cool, but I think we're not supposed to post in other people's apps....
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Post by Khaat Lupin on Tue Aug 27, 2013 10:50 pm

noooo. he's a Gryffindor. however, I don't see a way that a child can smother his mother to death and not have some lasting emotional damage from that. that's exceptionally violent. I really want you to look at how that has impacted him. and how the heck did he keep that a secret all these years? that's not something a kid at that age is generally capable of keeping secret. please look at this whole piece again. it should be creating a lot more depth for him.
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Post by Jordan Westfield on Tue Aug 27, 2013 11:33 pm

Honestly, you are right. I don't think I was ACTUALLY thinking when I did that. I just needed a secret for him to have. Let me change that.
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Post by Jordan Westfield on Tue Aug 27, 2013 11:49 pm

I edited it, hope that is better.
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Post by Khaat Lupin on Tue Aug 27, 2013 11:58 pm

yes. much better.

accepted and sorted to Gryffindor.
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