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Post by Saige Mars Wed Dec 22, 2010 5:25 am


MARS, Saige Troy William_Moseley
Saige Troy Mars
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INTRODUCTION
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    FULL NAME: Saige Troy Mars
    NICKNAMES: Mars, Troy.
    AGE: 17
    ALLEGIANCE: neutral
    HOGWARTS HOUSE: Ravenclaw or hufflepuff
    WAND TYPE: 12 inch Leprachaun hair
    PLAY BY William Moseley

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APPEARANCE
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    HAIR COLOR: Brown
    EYE COLOR: Brown
    HEIGHT: 6"5'
    BODY TYPE: thin
    GENERAL APPEARANCE: Saige is tall yet he is really thin. He isnt thin enough to see his ribs but if he lost about 10-20 pounds then you would be able to. He is really gostly pale and his eyes are a dark dark brown that is black whenever he is mad.

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PERSONALITY
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    CHARACTER STRENGTHS AND SKILLS:
    Charms
    Potions
    Flying
    Basketball
    CHARACTER WEAKNESSES:
    Hitting on girls
    doing good in D.A.D.A and COMC
    Making friends
    CHARACTER LIKES:
    Games
    Making potions
    Girls
    animals
    CHARACTER DISLIKES:
    Murderers
    Animal abusers
    Pink and purple
    GOALS:
    To get a great career In basketball
    QUIRKS:
    His eyes going black when he is mad
    PERSONALITY: Saige is a nice, Cool, atletic guy. He always messes up around girls though when it comes to hitting on them. He Hangs out with people who play sports sometimes. Saige helps when he is needed and is pretty smart. Most people would love to be around him because of his love for animals.

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FAMILY & POSSESSIONS
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    FATHER: Jason Mars
    MOTHER: Sandy Lye-Mars
    SIBLING(S):
    Jenna Mars (2)
    Jazmine (21)
    Sara (2)
    Sally (2)
    Jack (17)
    Scarlet(10)
    Star (20)
    Josh (21)
    Jessie(to be born)
    Shelby(to be born)
    BLOOD STATUS: Half blood
    RACE: Vampire
    SOCIAL STATUS: Wealthy
    PET(S):
    Snuck a wolf pup

    BROOMSTICK(): Nimbus 2001

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CHARACTER HISTORY
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    Early Years: When saige's mother was pregnant they said they were to have a boy and girl. some how the thing messed up and ended up having twin boys. Saige was the youngest by 2 minutes and the parents already had names picked out for their twins so he got a girls name while his twin got a boys name. At the time his sister Jazmine and his brother Josh were 4 and his sister Star was almost 3.

    As he grew to the age of 7, He had his first little sibling and ended up not being the youngest. At that time, Scarlet was born. She was the second one besides 10 year old star to be born without a twin or triplet.

    He went to school to become a great athlete and he played tennis football basketball soccer and basketball But as he got better at basketball he learned that he wasnt as good as he thought he was at the other sports. Those were his favorite games. He knew he was a wizard as soon as he was 10. But he knew his father was a wizard since he was really really little.
    Hogwarts Years: So far Every school year for Saige has been awesome. He got to play quidditch one year and got to make many many different friends. Every year for holidays he could stay at the school except when he was 15 he had to go home to meet his 3 little sisters who were born the day before halloween. He does really good in potions and Charms and did terrible in D.A.D.A and COMC

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BEHIND THE CHARACTER
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    YOUR NAME: Rora (Aurora)
    RP EXPERIENCE: on the day after valentines day it will be 1 year Very Happy
    HOW YOU FOUND US: im a member
    OTHER CHARACTERS: Aurora Remembrance blake Prison Mitchel and Rodgey



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Post by Khaat Lupin Thu Dec 23, 2010 12:50 am

I'd like to see you make him a bit more down to earth. I think you're going to find that making characters that are good at so many things become a bit difficult to control. I think its a natural tendency in sites like this to try to do that, but i think if you make him a bit more human you'll be happier with him and have more fun with him. It also gives you a lot more options creatively with him the more down to earth Saige becomes.

Try, for example, having him only good at maybe one sport or two. And I do know that the eye changing thing is a difficult thing to use. Your posts need to be from his point of view, and nobody really is that aware of whether their eyes are changing in some way or another. Not really. The only way Saige would know if, in a situation, his eyes were changing is if he were looking in a mirror when it happened.

Does that make sense? I'll be happy to help if I can.

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Post by Saige Mars Thu Dec 23, 2010 1:09 am

Okay so i changed it to where he used to play so many sports but learned he wasnt as good as he thought he was at those except when it came to basketball.

For the eye changing thing, i think it would be hard to use but.... Remember how Aurora has visions and flashbacks and can hear thoughts sometimes.. thats alot harder to use and im doing pretty good with it.. so i could make it to where his eyes start hurting and thats how he knows that they changed black..
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Post by Khaat Lupin Thu Dec 23, 2010 1:18 am

Nah. That's probably not a good thing. Changing the sports thing does help a lot. I'll let you try it as it is for now.

Accepted and sorted in to Hufflepuff.

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Post by Saige Mars Thu Dec 23, 2010 1:21 am

sweet thanx
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