Al Elric

O U T O F C H A R A C T E R
Name: Al Elric
Gender: Male
Age: 11
How you found Potter's Army: I found it on Forummotion.com searching for Harry Potter Roleplays
Any other characters on Potter's ARMY: nope this is my first
Have your read the Plot?: yes I did
Have your read the Must read threads?: yes I havE

B A S I C I N F O R M A T I O N




Name: Al Elric
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Blood Status: Half Blood
Year AND Age: 1st year agE 16
Preferred houses: Gryffindor
Canon or Original: original
Play-by:
ROBBIE AMMELL
A P P E A R A N C E
Height: 6'1
Hair: straight brown hair short
Eye color: Brown
Skin: light tan but mostly white
General Appearance:
His Brown eyes shine in the light with his straight short hair. His look isn't simple, its pretty complicated. His hair is not fully straight, it is half straight half spikey, his eye color is even pale brown with a touch of hazel color. He has a clean face with no pimples or marks and has a good clean body. He is tall and sharp looking and skinny.





P E R S O N A L I T Y
Skills: Fast at reacting and exploring the situation, Very smart and can learn spells fast. Lastily, He can read other peoples minds
Weaknesses: Hates demons, vampires, or death eaters. Loses courage when someone else is stronger then him. Lastly, he hates fire.
Likes: Water, People, Studying, and Helping others
Dislikes: Peer Pressure, fire, and danger
Motto: Live Life as a dog- go with it and be happy
General Personality:

He is a caring and nice half-blood. He will do anything for anyone for he is a suck up, specially for teachers. He loves pets and animals and can get easily angered. In turn, he has a short temper. He loves learning spells and meeting new people. He is overall a nice wizard but can get hated if you get him on the wrong side.

H I S T O R Y
Family Information; Immediate family member: Rick Refill (adopted Parent)
Childhood:

His parents were killed by death eaters when he was 4 years old and now lives with Rick Refill, his adoptive father. His adoptive mother had also passed away in a car crash, she was a muggle. He gets his half blood from his father, who was a wizard and his biological mother was a muggle

Hogwarts: (IS A FIRST YEAR)
Adulthood: ( NOT GRADUATED)

Short Roleplay:

Al walked across the halls to the other dorm. He could smell the other student girl's perfumes who tried to act preppy and cute for the guys. Al ignored the stench and kept going to the Slytherins house hang out. He stood behind a wall to see if anyone was walking through the halls, it was was midnight. His friends told him that there was a special wand or spell book in the enemy's house that would give you unbelievable power. Al had to have it. As his body shifted to the next hallway a Pre-fect was out checking the school. Al was caught and couldn't find his 'magical' power he was looking for.

Could you remove all the words in the brackets and fix the bold coding for me? Sorry it's just easier to read that way. And the playby is the celebrity you've chosen to represent you on the site.

oh ok I will edit it

Uh. Technically I'm no position to tell you what to do with your profile - that's the admin's job. However, if you want your character to be 16, he'll be a sixth year, you don't have to start at first.

Thanks keith, if you'd not done that post i don't think i'd have noticed this, i need to take over some of Matt's jobs for awhile now, huh. Wonder where Mari is... anyway.

With the age matter, you have a choice between two options.

Either you can be a first year, and be eleven, or you can be sixteen and a sixth year, but no 16 year old first years thanks. Also, if you choose to be a 6th year we need a short history on his life at hogwarts so far.

Finally, the RP doesn't seem to mention Al by his name, i suppose it's just a little bit of personal preference on my part, but you could use a bit of "Al did this" or "Al did that," y'know, that sort of thing. Also, it swaps between first and third person in parts, if you could edit that i'd appreciate it.

Other than that, i think it's all fine, if you've any questions, don't hesitate to post them here, or just shoot me, or any of the other admins, a PM.

Best of luck, Jess.

ok and i will just be a 1st year it will be fun lol

Alrighty, well, that's great, it's accepted, and best of luck. I suggest you go make a topic introducing yourself in comings and goings.