Brianna Burns's epic fan fiction

Prologue:

Brianna was a great young witch, who was at first doubted by most, in fact, thought to be a Squib. Then one day, she proved her worth, trolls had flooded the halls of Hogwarts, and her magical talent was finally realized as she battled most of the trolls on her own. Her worth was proven once more when hordes of dementors had taken over, she cast a powerful Patronus charm that drove them away. Now, she had graduated from Hogwarts with everyone's respect (with the exception of a few). She took an Auror course, and she passed with flying colors. Once she was an Auror, she began to track down evil around the world, taking missions in all countries. There was one mission, however that would take her life in a whole different direction.

That's a good start Brianna, good job

don't worry, there will be more, that start is only a prologue to my story, so I will write more as I can think of it.

Okay thats what I thought you were going to do but it's still a good start, I only had one sentence for my start lol

that's actually good because you don't want to bore people with reading too much, if you write too much you might give all of it away for your reader

Yah, well it was hard to write more of a storyline for mine as I couldn't find a way to discribe it lol

Chapter One: The Mission Begins

Brianna had received a red folder with the words "For your eyes ONLY" stamped in black across the front of it. She sat at her desk at the office and looked over the contents. Inside was a debriefing of the next mission, a particularly difficult one that involved going undercover and breaking in, and eventually killing someone. A photo was inside, she slowly lifted the photo to take a look, it was a picture of a young male with platinum blond hair and blue eyes, she felt a tingly sensation inside her, was it fear? She wasn't certain at the time exactly what it was, but she then read the enclosed letter with the steps of how to capture the young man and kill him.

Name: Alexander P. Squared
Age: 17
Occupation: Leader of a rebellion group set out to eliminate all Aurors for a darker world
Cautions: Animagus form is a wolf, will tear you to shreds. Highly skilled in dark arts, will kill you any possible way.
Current Location: Squared Manor

To complete the mission, detach the following and bring with you these instructions to complete the mission (to be completed the day after you read this letter):
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1. Wait for nightfall outside Squared Manor with some sort of concealment (Invisibility cloak, Animagus, etc.)

2. Once Alexander has gathered the Rebellion forces to the meeting, sneak in, or use an extendable ear to listen in on the debriefing of their next mission

3. Once the meeting has adjourned, record key points of his mission

4. Follow him in your disguise, being careful not to make a sound or be seen

5. Once you follow him and he disarms himself for the night, silently kill him with Sectumsempra across his throat


One thing to remember, do NOT be seen, heard, smelled or anything, he will kill you if he is alerted of your presence. Aurors have died at the hands of this man, even though he is young. You are our only hope.

Brianna looked at the photo and the letter, and she detached the instructions and hid them in her pocket, she then headed for home after checking out for the day, she needed to prepare. She took a small purse, slipped the instructions, her wand and an invisibility cloak inside of it. She treated herself to a large banquet of food, including a large turkey, lots of mashed potatoes, carrots, turnip, and stove top. She thought that this would be her last meal, as she thought the Auror offices had given her the most difficult case on file. That night, she fell asleep, nervous that she would be a casualty in the battle against evil.

LOVE IT! its an awesome story really good.. keep up the good work!

thank you, Darren, it's only a matter of time before I get the next chapter written

That's awesome Brianna, your really good at writing!