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Post by Chloe Goldman on Sun Nov 23, 2014 6:29 pm

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Chloe Goldman______________________________________________________________________________________------------------------------------------------------------INTRODUCTION------------------------------------------------------------
FULL NAME:Chloe Goldman
NICKNAMES:Cg
AGE:11
ALLEGIANCE:None
HOGWARTS HOUSE:Gryfindor or Hufflepuff
CLASSES:Charms,DADA, and Potions.
WAND:Elm wood, unicorn, 10", durable.
PLAY BY: Olesya Rulin

------------------------------------------------------------APPEARANCE------------------------------------------------------------

HAIR COLOUR:Dirty blonde
EYE COLOUR:Hazel
COMPARATIVE HEIGHT:Average.
BODY BUILD: Average.
GENERAL APPEARANCE: Chloe has dirty blonde hair, deep hazel eyes, white clean skin. Her body build looks like everyone else. If you were to look into a crowd of people you wouldn't be able to pick her out at first, till you saw the scar on her neck. The scar is not noticeable at first, but if you look close you will see it. Chloe hates her scar, it is a forever reminder of how her mother died.  

------------------------------------------------------------PERSONALITY------------------------------------------------------------
TRAITS:
*Helpful
*Thoughtfull
*Gracefull
*Truthfull
LIKES:
*Chocolate
*Drawing
*Playing in the snow
*Watching movies
DISLIKES:
*Vegitables
*Being scared
*Homework
*Bugs
GOALS: Right now she is only 11, so her biggest goal would be to make friends, get through the year with good grades, and forget about painful past.  
HABITS & QUIRKS:Chole has a habit of humming the song that her mother taught her before she died. While Chloe is in class and is nervous she can't help but bite her nails.   
BOGGART: Giant spider.
PATRONUS: Her fifth birthday party
DEMENTOR: Seeing her mothers car crash into a semi-truck
VERITASERUM: That her mothers death was her fault
MIRROR OF ERISED: To have her mother back
PERSONALITY: Chloe loves to play outdoors in the snow or in the summer she will go swimming. Chloe loves to take a few hours out of each day and find something to draw in her notebook. While in class she can't help but to bite her nails, so you will always find her with short nails. If a bug was to cross Chloes path she would yelp then jump on something to get away from it.

------------------------------------------------------------FAMILY
&amp;
POSSESSIONS
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FATHER:Henry Goldman-45
MOTHER:Sarah Goldman-Dead
SIBLING/S:An older stepbrother, Brian Goldman-15
OTHER: a black and white cat named Spice
BLOOD STATUS: Half-blood
SPECIES: Human
SOCIAL STATUS: Middle Class
PET/S:A black and white cat named Spice.
OTHER POSSESSIONS:optional.  magical
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------------------------------------------------------------CHARACTER
HISTORY
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EARLY YEARS:Chloe was born in America on March 19th,2016. Her father, Henry Goldman, already had a son from a previous engagement when he meet Chloe's mother, Sarah Goldman, in a freak accident. Henry was headed off to work when he was backed up in traffic. Which was normal for California. Out of nowhere an earthquake hit knocking a lot of people off the highway. Henry and Sarah where two of the few people that had managed to stay on the highway. They talked and helped other people out while waiting for help. From then on they were inseparable. After a few months they married then a few more months later they had Chloe. Sarah Goldman, Chloe's mother, was to afraid to tell her husband and baby girl that she was a witch that she wrote it down on a letter months before she died. Chloe's father and her couldn't stand staying in the same area after her mother died, so they moved a month after her magical abilities showed.[u]
HOGWARTS
YEARS:
[u]This is her first year.

ADULTHOOD:Not there yet.

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ALSO KNOWN AS:Use to be known as Samantha Burns.RP EXPERIENCE:A couple of years on here.
HOW YOU FOUND US:Was a member.
MAIN CHARACTER:This one.
CHARACTER PURPOSE:To have a fresh start.
RP SAMPLE:

At least one paragraph - skip if
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Post by Khaat Lupin on Sun Nov 23, 2014 10:28 pm

Sam,

Welcome back! You've got a great start, but I wish you'd given me a bit more history. The app is really good, but then I get to the history and I have lots of questions that would help me to understand her and how to sort her.

I don't know whether her parents are British and were just living in America for some reason, or if they were American, which would make me wonder why they were coming to England. I don't know what her orientation is to magic....I just want to know something more about how she got to where she is now. Is she close to her brother, or just something that tells me more about her family history.

Without that information, simply based on what you have, she is clearly a Hufflepuff in my mind. If you're happy with that, then, fine, I'll let the history slide. But without more information, I can't justify her as a Gryffindor.

K.
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Post by Chloe Goldman on Sun Nov 23, 2014 10:35 pm

It's been a long time since I did this. I was hoping to slowly reveal her past in posts. But if you really need it then I can do so. Being Hufflepuff is fine with me. You guys need more of them anyways. Thanks for saying that its really good. It makes me feel like I'm finely doing better at this. Very Happy
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Post by Khaat Lupin on Sun Nov 23, 2014 10:48 pm

I get your point. I do, but we've gotten really limiting about topics like abuse issues, disabilities, etc.. So, I really do need you to put that stuff in there, or at least the high points. Little details, I'm not so concerned about, but remember, your app reveals that stuff out of character. Not in character. The other characters aren't going to have that information unless you make it part of your thread. Sometimes that backstory does help your writing partner too.
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Post by Chloe Goldman on Sun Nov 23, 2014 10:53 pm

Ok I'll edit it now. Thanks. Very Happy Ok it's edited. Very Happy
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Post by Elijah Krum on Tue Nov 25, 2014 4:10 pm

Sorry for the wait, lovely!

Accepted and sorted into Hufflepuff!

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