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Welcome to Potter’s Army

WELCOME BACK, ALUMNI! Potter’s Army is a roleplaying site that's been up and running since 2007. We have just revamped the site for an AU version of our previous PA adventures, with our old writing buddies.

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Post by Everly Bardugo on Mon Sep 01, 2014 10:21 pm

Hi, Sarah! Welcome to PA Very Happy

There's just the one thing before I can approve this for you. There's really not too much detail in her history, so it's hard to tell how she came to have the personality that you've created for her. It's often difficult to get really into a character and have the word count that we ask for on this site if you don't have a full background or don't know exactly what made her be, say, manipulative. I'm not sure how she can be both selfless and self-centered/manipulative, for example. If you could put in more detail, that'd be super Smile
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Post by Everly Bardugo on Mon Sep 01, 2014 11:50 pm

Looks better, Sarah!

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