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Welcome to Potter’s Army

Welcome to Potter's Army

We have been a Harry Potter Roleplaying site since 2007. If you're an old member we hope you come check out the discord link provided below. And if you're looking for a new roleplaying site, well, we're a little inactive. But every once and a while nostalgia sets in and a few of our alumni members will revisit the old stomping grounds and post together. Remember to stay safe out there. And please feel free to drop a line whenever!

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What’s Happening?
Since every few months or so a few of our old members get the inspiration to revisit their old stomping grounds we have decided to keep PA open as a place to revisit old threads and start new ones devoid of any serious overarching plot or setting. Take this time to start any of those really weird threads you never got to make with old friends and make them now! Just remember to come say hello in the chatbox below or in the discord. Links have been provided in the "Comings and Goings" forum as well as the welcome widget above.

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Post by Everly Bardugo Mon Sep 01, 2014 10:21 pm

Hi, Sarah! Welcome to PA Very Happy

There's just the one thing before I can approve this for you. There's really not too much detail in her history, so it's hard to tell how she came to have the personality that you've created for her. It's often difficult to get really into a character and have the word count that we ask for on this site if you don't have a full background or don't know exactly what made her be, say, manipulative. I'm not sure how she can be both selfless and self-centered/manipulative, for example. If you could put in more detail, that'd be super Smile
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Post by Everly Bardugo Mon Sep 01, 2014 11:50 pm

Looks better, Sarah!

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