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Post by Altair Maximoff on Fri Jun 13, 2014 4:28 am

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Altair Eris Maximoff
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INTRODUCTION
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FULL NAME: Altair Eris Maximoff

NICKNAMES: Al, Tara,

AGE: 48

ALLEGIANCE: Read more in the feuding forces enlistment topic.  Death Eaters

HOGWARTS HOUSE: Slytherin Graduate

CLASSES: Students only. Please choose from Charms, CoMC, DADA, Transfiguration, and Potions.

WAND: 13 inches, dread wood, unicorn hair core unyielding

PLAY BY: Eva Green



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APPEARANCE
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HAIR COLOUR: Dark Brunette/Black

EYE COLOUR: Black

COMPARATIVE HEIGHT: Tall for a woman

BODY BUILD: Lithe, athletic, solidly built, flexible.

GENERAL APPEARANCE: Imposing, though her height is nothing compared to the average male she has the presence that demands respect. Her skin is pale as the china of a ivory doll and her eyes as black as the sky void of stars. Muscular but not overly so, strong.



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PERSONALITY
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TRAITS: Charismatic, Charming, Easily hides her true nature behind a smiling mask.

LIKES & DISLIKES: She loves to learn new things, quire power and read books, she loves to hear the shrill screams of her victims as they beg for death, She loves animals quite a bit and enjoys learning healing magic, she hates losing and muggleborns, she hates muggles and there vile ways. She hates stupidity and any form of failure she is one for victory not defeat.

GOALS: To succeed where the dark lord failed.

HABITS & QUIRKS: Absentmindedly runs her hand through her hair, when angry she tends to hit things or people whether or not they are the target of her rage.

BOGGART: Watching all she has accomplished crumpling away, the boggart would take the form of what ever she is working towards in that  moment failing.

PATRONUS: She draws upon the memory of when she first befriended her childhood friend Nadia. The younger girl in the memory pushes Altair down for not listening and goes on a rant about how she knows she is a good person making Altair realize she didnt have to be alone.

DEMENTOR: The dementor forces her to relive her childhood visits to see her uncle and the things she had been forced to see or do at his hand.

VERITASERUM: Though she comes off as cold blooded she secretly desires to be a mother.

MIRROR OF ERISED: She sees herself as finally a mother, holding her child who loves her indefinitely.

PERSONALITY: She's very charming on the outside, very charismatic and easily likeable, much like a teacher you would like in primary school not enough to be there friend but to respect. She is very much a leader but she is deeply passionate and reckless when it comes down to it. Sadistic since birth she enjoys and takes pleasure in the pain of others. Sometimes she can have a 'gryffindor' streak, when it comes to those she cares for she will put her entire life on the line for them and is known to rush into situations without a second thought. She's a walking contradiction, in the respect she loves to cause harm but she loves to help those she sees as worthy as well.



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FAMILY & POSSESSIONS
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FATHER: Bruce Maximoff

MOTHER: Morgan Olivia Prince

SIBLING/S: None

OTHER: Uncle Klaus none other at this time.

BLOOD STATUS:  Pureblood

SPECIES: Human

SOCIAL STATUS: Semi wealthy upper middle class range.

PET/S:
None at this time.

OTHER POSSESSIONS:
Wand, Weapons, Books, etc.



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CHARACTER HISTORY
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Early Years: Altair was raised in a structured home, with a strict father who taught her magic and weaponry before she could walk to a mother who was sure to drill into her mind what it takes to be a lady of pure bred descent. Growing up they visited her father's  uncle often until the time of his death during her years at hogwarts. She loved to read her mother's collection of novels and her father's collection of war journals. She did not have many friends before hogwarts and was quite introverted. She was raised to hate muggles and there muggleborn counterparts, some of her relatives argued muggleborns were there to save the wizarding world from extinction but she never saw it this way they were vial and had to be stamped out.

Hogwarts Years: During hogwarts she found herself the subject of teasing, especially when she had been found levitating a rat so she may practice spells on it. Usually a lover of animals she slowly slipped into mental decay as she aged, the more she learned the more she needed to know more. At night she would sneak into the restricted section of the library and thusly suffered many detentions for that. She was well liked by the members of her house and looked up to by first years. She slowly established herself as someone who was not to be trifled with and became a respected member of the upper classmen. By graduation she had crafted her self a reputation built on fighting back  both physically and academically not to mention her late night excursions to test new spells.

She made few friends, well people she felt were truly her friends, those she did make became family to her. Despite her cold exterior, her youngest and most beloved friend Nadia would slip into bed with her at night when she had a nightmare. With three years separating them Nadia saw Altair as a older sister. She'd help her with homework and hold her close during lightning storms.

She was far from a lonely student, she had friends who liked her for whatever reason and the professors respected her magical prowess. Sometimes she found it hard to find places to go when she could be alone, one of those times would be when she took solace in flying or walking along the grounds.

Adulthood: After leaving hogwarts she trained to become an auror feeling it was the only thing she could do. briefly she considered becoming an unspeakable but found it to leisurely and enjoyed the life of law enforcement. When Voldemort rose to power she joined the dark lord and devoted her entire being to him and his cause. She lives to serve him now, totally and completely, though she is submissive to her lord she is a dominant figure with other death eaters and is far from scared to get her hands dirty. Once his fall she served a decade sentence in azkaban then was released due to claiming she was a renewed member of society.




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BEHIND THE CHARACTER
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ALSO KNOWN AS: Altair/Al or Cole if you prefer.

RP EXPERIENCE: 13+ years of role play.

HOW YOU FOUND US: Forumotion, I was checking my own websites statical standings with other harry potter forumotion hosted sites and found this one.

MAIN CHARACTER: N/A

PURPOSE OF CHARACTER: To help with the lack of death eaters and give the plot someone truly diabolical to work with.

RP SAMPLE: Sitting at her desk in the department for Law Enforcement Altair pored over the recent reports about the where abouts of alleged death eaters. Lines creasing in her face with each paragraph she stood and swung her cloak over her shoulders. Once again the bottom feeders were close to being caught and though they did not know much she had to investigate. Swiftly leaving the ministry she was greatful not to encounter any of her coworkers on the lift or on the way out. She was well known around the ornate halls that was the heart of the wizarding world but this evening was a blessing in disguise.

Slipping out into the pouring rain she slid her hood over her head and apparated for Merlin's court a abandoned wizarding village not far from Godric's hallow. As she arrived she looked around the dilapidated neighborhood, spying the small curl of fire from a fire place she cursed loudly into the storm and made her way to the offending door.



Last edited by Altair Maximoff on Tue Jun 17, 2014 3:59 am; edited 2 times in total
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Post by Khaat Lupin on Tue Jun 17, 2014 2:00 am

Hi, Altair! Welcome to PA!

I've read your app, and while she's a good strong character, there's a couple of issues I have. First, we're a future based au plot. Its 2027, and Voldemort is dead. (Incidently, so is Harry, in case you were curious.) I like that she is dedicated to Voldemort's ideals, but if she truly served under him, she would need to be at least in her 50's. That would be problematic with Altair. But it might be interesting to handle that as either someone who is in her mid 30's who embraces the ideas he had or someone in her 50's who is grieving his loss. Either would be possible, really.

I would like you to even her out just a bit more. She's really, really dark. Perhaps a bit too dark for PA as she is right now. She's got a foundation of good qualities, but I'd like to see a bit more of them and a bit less of the darker ones. Might you be willing to consider that, please?

Let me know if I can help!
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Post by Altair Maximoff on Tue Jun 17, 2014 4:00 am

I did as you asked and tried Khaat decided to add in some details eliminate some..i dunno if its okay though :s idk how to make her better.
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Post by Khaat Lupin on Wed Jun 18, 2014 2:18 am

oh, much better. She should be very interesting!

I'll accept her now. thanks for the edits!

accepted and sorted to grads!
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