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Post by Rachel Masters on Mon Apr 21, 2014 8:57 pm

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Rachel Masters
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INTRODUCTION
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FULL NAME: Rachel Masters

NICKNAMES:  Rach, Ray, Masters,

AGE: 21

ALLEGIANCE: Read more in the feuding forces enlistment topic. Neutral

HOGWARTS HOUSE: Slytherin

CLASSES:

WAND: Mahogany, 11", Unicorn tail, Flexible

PLAY BY: Kristen Bell



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APPEARANCE
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HAIR COLOUR: Blonde

EYE COLOUR: Brown

COMPARATIVE HEIGHT: Average

BODY BUILD: Thin, petite

GENERAL APPEARANCE: blonde hair, brown eyes, creamy skin, dimples, approximately 5'7, athletic build, thin, appears innocent but is not.



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PERSONALITY
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TRAITS:Self centered, shallow, conniving, manipulative, slutty, persuasive

LIKES & DISLIKES: Likes: Music, running, reading, clubbing, dancing. Dislikes: Guys that try to hard, random people, heavy metal music, awkward situations.

GOALS: To become an actress

HABITS & QUIRKS: Blushes easily, bites lip alot, twirls hair, stutters when nervous.

BOGGART: Jason saying he hates her

PATRONUS: Her first time performing on stage

DEMENTOR: Falling off a broom 20 feet in the air

VERITASERUM: She is in love with her best friend

MIRROR OF ERISED: For Jason to come back to life

PERSONALITY: Rachel is a very spoiled girl.From a young age she was treated like a princess,and she loved it.She grew up to have an expensive taste,and she loves expensive jewelry,especially necklaces. She is a very intelligent girl,and tends to get B****.She always allured people with her looks to achieve her means.She was never a Barbie girl despite her appearance, and hates the color pink. She is very sarcastic and seductive,especially with men.She wants them to have money that they could spend on her,but she also looks for love and acceptance. She is a bit of a slut and will fall in love with any guy that pays attention to her.



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FAMILY & POSSESSIONS
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FATHER:
Name: Rocky Masters
Age: 43
Living or dead: Living
Blood status or species: Wizard

MOTHER:
Name: Michele Masters
Age: 40
Living or dead: Living
Blood status or species: Muggle

SIBLING/S:

OTHER:

BLOOD STATUS:  Halfblood

SPECIES: Wizard

SOCIAL STATUS: Wealthy

PET/S:


OTHER POSSESSIONS:




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CHARACTER HISTORY
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Early Years: Rachel was born and raised in London.She was spoiled from a young age,since her family was really rich,but she was never an "it" girl.She had expensive taste and liked to spend money on jewelry. She was always dressed very elegant,and expensive jewelry were always a part of her every outfit. She tried to be a popular girl as a child but was never accepted by the others.

Hogwarts Years: When Rachel arrived at Hogwarts, she tried to get in with the popular crowd but was never able to. She was always on the outside looking in. She turned her focus to her friends and her studies and graduated at the top of her class.

Adulthood: After Rachel graduated, she spent about a year traveling the world with her best friend Jason. But Jason dissappeared when they were in America. She got word a few months later that he was found dead. Rachel returned to London where she remains today working as a waitress.



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BEHIND THE CHARACTER
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ALSO KNOWN AS: Sydney

RP EXPERIENCE: Moderate

HOW YOU FOUND US: Forumotion.com

MAIN CHARACTER: Sierra

PURPOSE OF CHARACTER: To have another adult

RP SAMPLE:
Spoiler:
At least one paragraph. You can skip if you have another character



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Post by Khaat Lupin on Tue Apr 22, 2014 12:58 am

Sydney,

What makes her a Slytherin, exactly? I'd like to see you develop her more. I want to know more about her. I understand she's wealthy and spoiled, but that, in itself, doesn't make her a Slytherin. She surely does not have to be evil, but we need more in her history to help us understand her.

Give a shout if you need help!
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Post by Rachel Masters on Tue Apr 22, 2014 8:05 am

She was always a bit of a loner which is kind of the Slytherin type. She is seductive, conniving, manipulative, a bit of a slut, very B****, and controlling. She is still grieving over the loss of Jason and tries to distract herself by sleeping with men. She can be evil sometimes, but if neutral in the war. Other than that cant really think of anything.
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Post by Khaat Lupin on Thu Apr 24, 2014 12:51 am

Just so we're on the same page, being a loner does not make someone a Slytherin. Neither does being seductive, controlling, promiscuous, etc. But in her traits you also have her as being outgoing, loving people, bubbly, happy,...and that's entirely different from being a loner, b*****, conniving, manipulative....Its not really possible to love people and to want to take advantage of them.

I think I get where you want to go with her. You seem to want her to be a rather shallow, little snotty woman. Your app isn't very consistent with where you seem to want to go.

If you want her to be that shallow little snot, then you will need to play her as being self centered--and that would make her, to some extent, Slytherin material, which I gather is something you think is important for her. And that might mean you need to stray from how you've written the app.

If we're on the same page, then let me know. I want to be sure that I completely understand what you're doing before I accept her.
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Post by Rachel Masters on Thu Apr 24, 2014 7:12 am

Ok I fixed it a bit
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Post by Khaat Lupin on Fri Apr 25, 2014 12:28 am

alright. i'll accept her. thanks for all the edits. I appreciate it and your patience.

accepted and sorted into grads!
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