Nesbitt, Damian
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Post by Damian Nesbitt Sat Jun 15, 2013 5:28 am

Damian Shaun Nesbitt
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INTRODUCTION
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    FULL NAME: Damian Shaun Nesbitt

    NICKNAMES: N/A

    AGE: 16

    ALLEGIANCE: None currently

    HOGWARTS HOUSE: Slytherin, uh I honestly can't think of a second.

    CLASSES: Potions, Charms

    WAND: Oak, Unicorn horn, 6 inches, firm

    PLAY BY: Liam Hemsworth



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APPEARANCE
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    HAIR COLOUR: brown

    EYE COLOUR: brown

    COMPARATIVE HEIGHT: tall

    BODY BUILD: athletic

    GENERAL APPEARANCE: Damian has brown hair and brown eyes. He doesn't care much about the clothes he's wearing as long as he's comfortable. He's not the most muscled person around, but he looks athletic. He also looks older then he is because of his beard.



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PERSONALITY
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    STRENGTHS & WEAKNESSES:
    S- Charms
    S- Teasing
    S- Pranks
    S- Being patient
    S- Making profit when selling things

    W- DADA
    W- He's addiction to spice
    W- Understanding
    W- His real sister, he spoils her
    W- Waking up for things on time

    LIKES & DISLIKES:
    L- Spice and Sugar
    L- His real sister, Janna
    L- Fighting
    L- Dueling

    D- His new family
    D- Loosing money
    D- Quidditch
    D- Smart alecks
    GOALS: To kill his new adoptive family
    To be reunited with his real sister

    HABITS & QUIRKS: He likes to count his money in public to show off, whenever he's bored.

    BOGGART: His real sister dieing

    PATRONUS: When his father was still alive

    DEMENTOR: When his father died

    VERITASERUM: He accidentally killed his mother

    MIRROR OF ERISED: For his younger sister to like him.

    PERSONALITY: Damian is an ass. He likes to make fun and bully people just for the Hell of it. He also abuses Sugar and Spice regularly. He's also a con artist. He knows how to rip people off when selling things. He's rather wealthy and likes to flaunt it in front of everybody. The only person that he's ever kind to was his younger sister Janna, who hates him.



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FAMILY & POSSESSIONS
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    FATHER: Joseph Clark /dead

    MOTHER: Tess Clark /dead

    SIBLING/S: Janna Santelli- Real sister
    Sam Nesbitt- Adoptive brother
    Sarah Nesbitt- Adoptive sister

    OTHER: His adoptive parents

    BLOOD STATUS: half blood

    RACE: Human

    SOCIAL STATUS: Middle class, but he always has a lot of money on him.

    PET/S:
    optional. students may only bring owls, cats, mice and toads to Hogwarts.

    OTHER POSSESSIONS:




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CHARACTER HISTORY
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    Early Years: Damian was born in Venice, Italy. His family was rather wealthy and everything was great. His father was killed in a heart attack soon after his sister Janna was born. He was 2 when this happened. His mother had no job and the family started living rather poorly. When he was 8, his mother was sick in bed. Damian decided to make his mother a get well soon card. She pushed it off to the side because she was to weak that she could barely open her eyes, she was dieing. Damian was furious, he proceeded to choke his mother to death. Unknowing this would kill her, Damian just left the body there. It wasn't until Janna found her mother not breathing, that Damian knew that she was dead. The siblings were shipped off to an orphanage in Britain. Janna was adopted soon after, leaving him alone.

    Hogwarts Years: Damian went to Hogwarts. During his third year, Janna told him that she wanted nothing to do with him because of the incident that happened with their mother. Then he turned to drugs. During the middle of his sixth year he was adopted by the Nesbitt family, he hated them instantly.

    Adulthood: At least 1 paragraph of your character's history after Hogwarts




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BEHIND THE CHARACTER
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    ALSO KNOWN AS: Nick

    RP EXPERIENCE: A few years

    HOW YOU FOUND US: I don't remember

    MAIN CHARACTER: Nick Potter

    PURPOSE OF CHARACTER: I wanted another character that was a student, but other members played his family.

    RP SAMPLE: No! No! No!


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Post by Elijah Krum Sat Jun 15, 2013 10:58 pm

We're not very Slytherin yet, buddy.

What we have here is an arrogant Hufflepuff with a superiority complex and a tunnel-vision purpose; his whole life revolves around his mother's murder and the subsequent break up of his family.

He hasn't been written to have violent tendencies and is more of your high school bully at the moment. To kill takes a lot out of someone. To kill your own mother: 100x more. He needs that vicious edge for that to make sense. He's a little too flimsy - again, high school bully. Y'know what I mean?

What's his motivation? He doesn't have a lot of that going on. Apart from his beef with his family, he's totally 2D - he needs to be 3D! Have a read of what it means to be a Slytherin - here.

Bring in more Slytherin traits and explain in more detail what his motivations are. Beyond the annoyance - what drove him to kill his mother? Why does he hate his family so? Why does he want to kill his adoptive sister over anyone else? He has serious issues, it's clear, but it's not entirely clear.

What you have is the making of a very dark character but at the moment he's too "bully-like" and you need to give him that edge.

Here is a list of character traits to help you out. Might be useful.

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Post by Khaat Lupin Thu Jul 11, 2013 11:12 pm

Nick, if you want to keep this character, please let us know. Otherwise, I'll need to move him to storage until you're ready to edit him.

Thanks,
k.
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Post by Nick Potter Thu Jul 11, 2013 11:41 pm

Yeah, I'm just SUPER busy with stuff right now. I'll try soon.
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Post by Khaat Lupin Fri Jul 19, 2013 12:51 am

moving.
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