WENTZ, Michelle Mariana
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We have been a Harry Potter Roleplaying site since 2007. If you're an old member we hope you come check out the discord link provided below. And if you're looking for a new roleplaying site, well, we're a little inactive. But every once and a while nostalgia sets in and a few of our alumni members will revisit the old stomping grounds and post together. Remember to stay safe out there. And please feel free to drop a line whenever!

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Since every few months or so a few of our old members get the inspiration to revisit their old stomping grounds we have decided to keep PA open as a place to revisit old threads and start new ones devoid of any serious overarching plot or setting. Take this time to start any of those really weird threads you never got to make with old friends and make them now! Just remember to come say hello in the chatbox below or in the discord. Links have been provided in the "Comings and Goings" forum as well as the welcome widget above.


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Post by MichelleWentz Thu Apr 12, 2012 3:23 pm

WENTZ, Michelle Mariana INSERT CHARACTER PICTURE URL HERE

CHARACTER FULL NAME
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INTRODUCTION
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    FULL NAME:
    Mariana Michelle Wentz
    NICKNAMES:
    Michelle
    AGE:
    15
    ALLEGIANCE:
    Neutral
    HOGWARTS HOUSE: (Canons state one, Original state two and admins will sort you in one of them. Graduates state ex-house. Durmstrang or Beauxbatons just state your school.)

    CLASSES: (Students only. Please choose from Charms, CoMC, DADA, Transfiguration, and Potions. 2 Minimum for Basic students and 2 for NEWTs, or one class and an internship for NEWTs)

    WAND: (Wood type, core, length + flexibility)

    PLAY BY: (Optional, but recommended. Remember to check the face claim to make sure you're celebrity isn't already taken)


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APPEARANCE
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    HAIR COLOR:
    Dark Blonde
    EYE COLOR:
    Green and Blue (Heterochromnia sectoral)
    HEIGHT:
    5"6'
    BODY TYPE: Slender, Thin, Stocky etc.
    Slender
    GENERAL APPEARANCE:
    1/4 Veela, 1/2 vampire, dark blonde hair with pink highlight, green and blue eyes i had a heterochromnia sectoral eyes, average tall, average body.

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PERSONALITY
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    CHARACTER STRENGTHS AND SKILLS:
    special connection to dark creature, seer, parseltongue
    CHARACTER WEAKNESSES:
    death, darkness, avada kedavra
    CHARACTER LIKES:
    dark creatures, blood, shiny charms
    CHARACTER DISLIKES:
    dark places, pumpkin, ogre
    GOALS:
    Fight her weakness and be the greatest witch
    QUIRKS:
    drink blood, act unusual
    BOGGART:
    end of the world
    PATRONUS:
    when she meets friends in Hogwarts
    DEMENTOR:
    Saw her mom murdered by her vampire dad
    VERITASERUM:
    made a handmade dark mark on the back of his neck (Bellatrix is one of her idol)
    MIRROR OF ERISED:
    be a daughter of dumbledore
    PERSONALITY:
    Michelle is a nice warm girl with a weird eyes and 'loud' personality. sometimes you can found her on the corner of the room with her cat mumbling in parseltongue about her dark past. but beside that she's a very lovely girl. she loves her friends and her furry friends. she always bring a small bottle on her neck filled with red thick liquid (blood). when she can't find a fresh blood to fill her throat, she always drink liquid inside her bottle. and she always wear a pirates lookalike costume under her cloak.

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FAMILY & POSSESSIONS
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    FATHER:
    Vampire
    MOTHER:
    1/2 Veela (Wizard)
    SIBLING(S):
    The only child of the family
    OTHER:
    Her black cat (Franceinstein)
    BLOOD STATUS:
    Halfblood
    RACE: (Human/ Vampire/ Werewolf/ Part Veela etc. Only members who have been active for at least one month are able to create non-human characters)
    Human (1/2 vampire, 1/4 veela)
    SOCIAL STATUS:
    Wealthy
    PET(S):
    Black cat (Franceinstein)
    BROOMSTICK():
    Firebolt
    OTHER POSSESSIONS:
    A small farm full of dark creatures in her mansion.

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CHARACTER HISTORY
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    Early Years: (At least 1 paragraph of your characters history during ages 1-11.)

    Hogwarts Years: (At least 1 paragraph of your characters history during their stay at Hogwarts.)

    Adulthood: (At least 1 paragraph of your characters history after Hogwarts)



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BEHIND THE CHARACTER
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    YOUR NAME:
    Michelle Wentz
    RP EXPERIENCE:
    Neverending Paradise Role Play on Facebook
    HOW YOU FOUND US: if the answer is google, what you typed in.
    Google "roleplay"
    OTHER CHARACTERS:

    PURPOSE OF CHARACTER: To ensure deliberate creation of character

    RP SAMPLE:
    Spoiler:
    At least one paragraph. You can skip if you have another character

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Post by Jess Potter Fri Apr 13, 2012 12:17 am

Heya.
Just a few bits and bobs.

Welcome to the site, it's always lovely to see someone new. I hope you have a great time here on PA Smile

However there's just a bit that needs fixing so far.

Obviously you've left a few things out, but here's some stuff that needs fixing for what you've already done.

First, she's quite a dark character, but you've left her neutral. She might be interested in joining the Dark Followers. They work with the Death Eaters but are a sort of student based following. Just a thought.

Next, there may be some issues with the character's species, as she's not a full human, and generally we don't allow new members to have non-human characters, like it says. I think that the 1/4 veela bit would be fine, but I'm less confident about the vampirisism. Any chance that could be dropped, or is it essential to your character?

Also, for the general appearance you've sorta done a bit of a dot point summary. We prefer what you did for the personality, the in depth paragraph, so if you could do that it'd be great.

Otherwise good luck, she seems like a very interesting character, a slytherin, I daresay, but feel free to prove me wrong Wink

Annnnd that's all, I suppose. Welcome again and let me know if you disagree with me here (I don't mind if you do Smile)
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Post by Khaat Lupin Tue Apr 24, 2012 9:29 pm

MIchelle,

We generally allow 2 weeks for new applications. You are nearing the end of your two weeks period. I can only give you a couple more days beyond that. I will give you until the end of the month. If you don't have her finished by then, I will have to move her to "storage" until you want her again. We can certainly retrieve her any time you like.

If you need some help in finishing her, please just let us know. We'd be happy to help you!

K.
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Post by Elijah Krum Fri Apr 27, 2012 4:03 pm

Sorry Michelle, this app will be moved to the character graveyard as you've run out of your 2 week max to complete the app. If you want it back just shoot me a PM and I'll retrieve it for you. (:

- Eli.

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