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Post by Manamie Tanaka Thu Mar 17, 2011 8:42 pm


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MANAMIE CHIYOKO TANAKA
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INTRODUCTION
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    FULL NAME: MANAMIE CHIYOKO TANAKA

    NICKNAMES: Manamie, or chichi (only used in secret by Mashara)

    AGE: 22

    ALLEGIANCE: Nuetral

    HOGWARTS HOUSE: Raven claw
    WAND TYPE:

    PLAY BY Devon Aoki


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APPEARANCE
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    HAIR COLOR: Light Brown and curly

    EYE COLOR: Black

    HEIGHT: 5'4”

    BODY TYPE: Slender, Thin and showing in all the right places.

    GENERAL APPEARANCE:
    All though still a bit of a tomboy manamie likes to wear the latest fashions and is a stickler for looking good no matter what she may be wearing. Some have said she may be too delicate looking but don’t let that fool you, she's as tough as nails and can take down any woman and man if she so wished.


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PERSONALITY
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    CHARACTER STRENGTHS AND SKILLS:
    • Keen intellect
    • Kind
    • Vast knowledge of the martial arts
    • Vast knowledge of plants
    • Good with potions
    • Can cook a mean meal

    CHARACTER WEAKNESSES:
    • Lonely
    • Can be shy in difficult circumstances
    • Won’t stand for any one putting her family of family members down.

    CHARACTER LIKES:
    . men that can cook
    .Pocky sticks
    .anime movies and manga :her favorite s are howls moving castle, ponyo, the gudam series, 8 man, shijuku monster city, cowboy beebop, samuri champloo, and trinity blood
    -bruce lee (he's her hero)
    -j-pop band vamps and Gacktjob

    CHARACTER DISLIKES:
    • Seeing her best friends hurt
    • Spiders
    • Grabby men

    GOALS:
    • To live and work in Hogsmead and may be marry Mashara who she has had a crush on since she was a teen and maybe still teach karate on the side.

    QUIRKS:
    • Likes to keep things clean and tidy
    • Loves to massage and pamper the person she cares about.
    • Is an affectionate woman.
    • loves the martial arts and is addicted to pocky sticks.(a japanese sweet)

    BOGGART:
    . Trantulas as big as arragog

    • loosing mashara under any circumstances

    PATRONUS:
    • being accepted into the Kazama family after her family was killed and getting her first kiss

    DEMENTOR:
    • The day her family was killed

    AMORENTIA:
    • Lynx body spray as worn by mashara (it drives her bananas)

    MIRROR OF ERISED: .
    to be the best female martial artist in all of the region to bring honor and glory to her "adopted"family


    PERSONALITY:
    • She is a loving kind woman who will help anyone though she will not hurt those less fortunate as she under stands how it is to have that kind of bad luck as she was left alone after her parents died and was taken in By mash and his family for several years. Thanks to them she learned what it was like to be part of a family that was built on traditions and she knew it would be down to her to continue the legacy and she accepted that but has never found that one man who made her feel as Mash has all her life.


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FAMILY & POSSESSIONS
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    FATHER: Miyavi TANAKA, 59, Valet for his employer (dead)
    MOTHER: sue-san Fujiwara,53 years old , House keeper (dead)

    SIBLING(S):
    Brothers
    • khala , 30 years old, Inn keeper, Married, one child
    • kozi, 26 years old, Chef, Married, three children
    • yu-ki tetsu, 29, years old, Married , twins
    • Kami, 27 years old, Dating
    • Youki , 23 years old, married , one on way.

    OTHER: None

    BLOOD STATUS: Halfblood

    RACE: Human
    SOCIAL STATUS: Middle Class
    aPET(S): An allbino python named bananas

    BROOMSTICK(): Nimbus 2011 bright red


    OTHER POSSESSIONS:
    Ancient samurai sword of the tanaka clan.

    Bottle of water in a glowing bottle said to have magical healing properties,

    Hher mothers portable potion kit.

    Various martial art weapons.


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CHARACTER HISTORY
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    Early Years:
    Mamanie was born to a servant class family her father worked as a Valet for a wealthy man. Her mother was the house keeper for them. She was meant to be their son’s wife when she became old enough but that all changed when she was five, she was sat playing with the boy when men burst through the main door bullets flew one killed the boy another hit her shoulder thinking she was dead they continued to kill the family including her father leaving her with just her mother and brothers but all of them turned their backs on both her mother and her saying they had no room and would not take in an old widow and little girl since they had enough women in their homes. Gackt’s grandmother Obasan heard all the excuses from each brother and decided enough was enough and that they would live with them and keep house for her. She was happy to be living with her cousins but found mash annoying as he kept pulling her pigtails as they played though she got her own back by stuffing Obasans dumplings up his nose. Every summer she would go swimming with them sometimes she would sneak from the house and skinny dip by the light of the full moon she knew she was safe. When Mash and Gackt for school he was the one who gave her, her first kiss and in her heart she knew he was the one for her.

    Hogwarts Years:
    When her powers came in, she accidently blew up a garden shed she was so scared she hid and it was Gackt who found her and told her it was ok. Soon at eleven her letter came and she was over the moon on the day she was sorted she hoped she would be in one of the houses Gackt or Mash were she hoped not mash as she felt it would make her heart ache for him more at not being able to be with him in a special way, her classes went fine as she focused on them she had several boys interested in her but she never went with any.

    In her third year she found one boy did started to date but it didn’t last as he found out he was cheating on her so she broke it off again working on her spells and potions. Teachers would help her and fellow girls would try and make her date guys but she refused seeing mash walking around the school she tried to stay away from areas she knew he would be in. In her fifth year she decided to just study her mind now set on school and not boys though one did start to talk to her and they struck up a friendship threw that year he helped her. Come her seventh year he asked her marry her but no soon as they left the school he left her for another girl leaving her heart broken and headed back to Japan alone.


    Adulthood:
    Now back in Japan she got a job teaching dance in her local town’s children. She still lived with Obasan and her mother helping where she could clean the house. She also learned to teach the local little ones karate to keep herself busy, so she didn’t have to think about how she was used and dumped buy that boy. She then heard of Mash and of what had happened to him with Hyde and felt a common hurt with him. She spent every night looking up at the stars and hoping he would be alright but when word came he was not doing well she asked for permission to go and see what she could do. Obasan agreed as did her mother but she had to have a good reason Gackt provided it with a babysitter for their boys and their new daughter. She left and went straight to Gackt’s.



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BEHIND THE CHARACTER
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    YOUR NAME: Gackt

    RP EXPERIENCE: Too many years to list

    HOW YOU FOUND US: Already member

    OTHER CHARACTERS: Gackt Kazama

    RP SAMPLE: See Gackt Kazama




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Post by Elijah Krum Thu Mar 17, 2011 9:23 pm

Gackt can you use the correct template please? (:

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ok fixed I hope please look again
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Post by Khaat Lupin Fri Mar 18, 2011 12:48 am

i'd like you to rethink your character "likes", please. they sound a whole lot more like what you intend for strengths to me. they sound like things she is good at, rather than things she likes. You might want to explore some of the other applications in order to help clarify those things.

And although it is not manditory, I'd love to see you explore her just a bit more and make her a bit more individualistic. She has great potential to be a really good character, but you need to make her more of a distinctively different person in order to do that. Its just my thoughts, anyway.

If you want to try to do that and need a little help, just ask!

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Post by Manamie Tanaka Fri Mar 18, 2011 3:49 am

ive fixed everything about the likes and dislikes my computer upstairs 's editing program mashed everything altogether and i dint see that beofre, so no worries.
how do mean by a more induvialist charcater Khatt? i'd like to know and then i can decide which direction to go.
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Post by Khaat Lupin Sat Mar 19, 2011 12:08 am

Well, i'm only going to mention things in pieces. I think it'll work better that way. Also, you may see some of the other admins giving their 2 cents simply because most of them have a lot of well developed characters and they may have tips of their own. Overall, you need to do as much as you can to steer your character away from doing the same thing or being too much like the standard tv or movie characters, or even like a lot of the ones here on PA. You want to make that person as different as you know how.

Please explain to me how stubbornness is a strength. I dont' get that. In most societies and cultures, stubbornness is seen as a weakness. If you see it as a strength, tell me how. Also, she's only 20. Its unlikely she would be good with a wand and with potions both. That is more the "speed" for someone who is a bit older.

I'd like her to have a stronger patronus. If you remember the books, harry's memories were really challenged until he found the one thing that was as close to bliss as he ever knew.

The Mirror of Erised is supposed to help you figure out what your character wants most. She seems a bit shallow if all she wants out of life is, really, to be a good person and to have this one person in her life. Maybe she needs to be a bit more deeply developed.

Lets start with some of those things, at least for my opinions.

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Post by Manamie Tanaka Sat Mar 19, 2011 3:12 am

stubbornness was a mistake, it was suppose to be a wekaness but i screwed up and stuck it where it shouldnt have been , as for her age its supposed to be 22 not 20 but ive fixed that as well and tried my bestest to fix the others you mentioned . im exhausted.
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Post by Khaat Lupin Sat Mar 19, 2011 6:23 pm

much, much better! good job. I will accept this, but on two conditions.

First, the sword cannot be a magical item. i will allow it as a muggle item, as a family heirloom.

Second, you do need to go to magical artifacts and claim the magical bottle of water. That will help you ferret out a bit what it does and does not do.

Accepted and sorted into grads.

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Post by Gackt Kazama Sat Mar 19, 2011 6:28 pm

yeah thats what i was going to claim it as a family heirloom or just a muggle martial arts sword.
okay im claiming my bottle of water.
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