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Post by Rayasha May Mon Feb 21, 2011 11:53 am

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    FULL NAME: Rayasha Morganna May

    NICKNAMES: Ray, Raya, Yasha

    AGE: 13

    ALLEGIANCE: Neutral

    HOGWARTS HOUSE: Hufflepuff

    WAND TYPE: Phoenix Feather, 10 1/2 inches, Unicorn Hair

    PLAY BY:


    HAIR COLOR: Brown, with little hints of blonde

    EYE COLOR: Brown, hazel coloured

    HEIGHT: 5'4

    BODY TYPE: Thin, mostly described as slim

    GENERAL APPEARANCE: Rayasha usually wears a tank top and shorts in summer and spring, but in winter and autumn she wears a fleece and a warm full-sleeve jumper underneath with a pair of jeans. In summer & spring she wears sandals, in winter and autumn she wears either boots or trainers.


    Casting spells, socializing, comforting

    Being mean, fighting, accepting defeat

    Power, friends, communication, loyalty

    Disloyalty, shyness, true stories

    To see the ghost of her mum, to get away from her dad, to be friends with her sisters and brothers

    Never stops talking, thinks people are her friends when they've hardly met

    BOGGART: Death Eaters, because they killed her mum.

    PATRONUS: Being with her mum on Valentines day, 1999, with her mum clapping and clapping because Rayasha won the poetry contest in the festival.

    DEMENTOR: Her mum's death

    AMORENTIA: The smell of her mum's perfume

    MIRROR OF ERISED: To see her mum again

    PERSONALITY: Rayasha loves being outdoors and talking to others, and she enjoys being loyal and making friends. She loves her mum and her aunt, but she hates her dad. She is the youngest of her siblings and because of this, they tease her. She's kind, clever, bubbly, chatty, clever (I mentioned that already!) and she looooooooooooooooves...drum roll, please...PUMPKIN JUICE!


    FATHER: Richard May

    MOTHER: Adreia May

    SIBLING(S): Tony May, Carlos May, Polly May, Dana May

    OTHER: Her aunt and uncle - Beth and John.

    BLOOD STATUS: Halfblood

    RACE: Human (if I've been active for one month can I be Part Veela?)

    SOCIAL STATUS: Wealthy


    Nimbus 2001



    Early Years: Rayasha, when she was 5, saw her mother's death (because the Death Eaters murdered her) and cried until she was 9, and she discovered she had to live with her rotten father. So she went to her father's house and he bossed her around all the way up to 10, when she set off to Hogwarts. In the holidays she visited her Aunt Beth and Uncle John so she was perfectly safe until her 11th birthday, when they moved to Australia and couldn't make it in the holidays, so Rayasha has to cope with her dad.

    Hogwarts Years: In first year, she liked singing and kept on bursting out with 'Jessie J ft. BoB - Price Tag' and also went to hip hop dancing lessons in the school holidays. In second year she was so advanced the class was to beginner for her. She went to an expert class for dancing and carried on. She still does it now, in third year. She visits Hogsmeade a lot. In second year, she also joined Dueling Club but quit when she decided it was too rough. She took up Quidditch then, practising - taking Flying Class, as well.

    Adulthood: Not yet adult.


    YOUR NAME: Maisy

    RP EXPERIENCE: I'm good at RPing, yeah

    HOW YOU FOUND US: My friend (Malowney Catt on Potters Army)


    RP SAMPLE: Rayasha entered the Great Hall, ready for the Sorting Ceremony. She was so excited! She listened through as the others got sorted into their houses.
    "May, Rayasha," the professor said.
    Rayasha stepped up and sat on the chair. The professor carefully placed the Sorting Hat on her head and it talked to her!
    "Hmm...are you cunning enough for Slytherin? Or maybe Ravenclaw? Gryffindor? No, there's much more to you than that. HUFFLEPUFF!"
    Rayasha jumped off her seat and rushed to join her fellow Hufflepuffs on the table.

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Post by Elijah Krum Mon Feb 21, 2011 2:07 pm

Hey Maisy,
Welcome to Potter's Army!

So far the app is good but it's quite vague. The history seems a bit rushed to me. You need to take more time with it, read over it and go more in depth with it. How did her mother die? Where was she born? Where did her father live? <-- questions like that. Then there's the Hogwarts part. You have to do that too as she is a third year. You only need to do from first year to third, though. Also, with the early years, what was the family like? It sounds as if her mother and father weren't together and her relationship with her father is strained as a result. I'm not sure on that.

You need to add more to the appearance. She doesn't have a play-by so you need to explain more or less exactly who she looks -- for your own benefit as much as everyone else's. I like her style though. It says practical rather than stylish. I like it. Wink

Personality! She interests me a lot. She clearly had a very close relationship with her mother -- perhaps that's something you could talk about in the part that lists her mother or in the history -- and she seems to have no personal trauma despite seeing her mother die. What specific moment conjures the Patronus for her? You put just simply being with her mother -- is there a specific time or place with her mother that makes the Patronus take form? The Boggart is interesting. Why exactly is she so scared of Death Eaters? I can only presume that they killed her mother. If she's so terrified, how does she handle being around children of known Death Eaters?

Those are just my queries! xD No worries, there. And as per the Half-Veela request, you won't be able to make Rayasha a Half-Veela but we can discuss another character with those genes at a later date. It's good so far!

- Eli.

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Post by Rayasha May Tue Feb 22, 2011 11:24 am

I've edited it. If you read it closely you'll find the editing.
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Post by Khaat Lupin Wed Feb 23, 2011 11:38 pm

Hey, Maisy! Welcome aboard!

I've read your app, and I have some questions that we really do need to have you answer before we can aprove this.

1. Who's your playby? Got a pic you're going to mount up there? Or do you prefer your character to not have any sort of playby? If you need help with that, speak up.

2. You've made it very clear that she thinks her dad is a prat, but why, exactly? its a huge part of her history that you have left out. You need to tell us so we can understand her.

3. She was just 5 when her mom died? If she loves her aunt and uncle so much, why is all of her thinking revolving around her dead mom? If she was just 5, she would barely remember her mom.

4. You do realize that she is 13 and the site is set in, like, 2022, right? There is no way she could possibly have won a poetry contest in 1999. she would not have been born yet. And if she was 5 when her mom died, she would not have been able to write poetry yet. Please fix that.

5. Please mark any family members as deceased, if they are--such as her mom. Just put (deceased) behind their names.

6. cat? is it with her at hogwarts? does it have a name? what kind of cat?

7. rp experience? Give is a specific idea. 6 months? 1 year? What? Newbie? There's no wrong answer here. Just be specific.

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