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Post by Elizabeth "Effy" Abney Tue Dec 28, 2010 2:32 am


ABNEY, Elizabeth Cherie Melanie-Laurent-888964

Elizabeth "Effy" Cherie Abney
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INTRODUCTION
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    FULL NAME: Elizabeth "Effy" Cherie Abney

    NICKNAMES: Effy

    AGE: 17, year seven.

    ALLEGIANCE: Potters Army

    HOGWARTS HOUSE:Ravenclaw

    WAND TYPE:Oak, Dragon Heartstring, 11in

    PLAY BY:Mélanie Laurent



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APPEARANCE
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    HAIR COLOR:Dirty Blonde

    EYE COLOR:Green

    HEIGHT:5'8

    BODY TYPE: Slender

    GENERAL APPEARANCE: Effy has a very skinny body type, but well developed. Her bust is fair, but because of her size her chest isn't fuller past the age of fifteen. Her face features are attractive, but around her eyes she tends t look tired mainly because she might be tired at that time. Her eyes green, but not like emerald its more light and not as strongly green. She has very smooth legs, also arms and a dancers body. To sum up her appearance is that she's model like, but healthy enough to obtain her features.


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PERSONALITY
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    CHARACTER STRENGTHS AND SKILLS:
    >Intelligence(even if if not seeming so)
    >Defence spells
    >Herbology
    >Athletic
    >Transfiguration

    CHARACTER WEAKNESSES:
    >Weird behaviors
    >Not well cautioned
    >Keeping a good relationship

    CHARACTER LIKES:
    >Animals
    >Adventure
    >Writing
    >Ravenclaw
    >Gryffindor

    CHARACTER DISLIKES:
    >Foul odors
    >Those who use dark magic
    >Know-it-alls
    >Things that make her squeamish
    >Slytherin(some)
    >Disorganized persons
    >Rude people


    GOALS: Has yet to decide, she's going with experiencing several careers till she figures out what she wants.

    QUIRKS:
    >In some awkward moments she makes odd faces
    >She'll act goofy even if she doesn't mean to.
    >Kind of crazy at times, not insane, but funny crazy.

    BOGGART: To never find love.

    PATRONUS: N/A

    DEMENTOR: N/A

    AMORENTIA: Vanilla

    MIRROR OF ERISED: To be loved by someone outside her family, a love like the cliché of boyfriend girlfriend terms. Just keeping a good relationship is what she wants.

    PERSONALITY: Effy is a free spirit, doesn't tend to realize her action and enjoys her odd behaviors. She can make you laugh even if she doesn't intend to or she can make laugh so bad intentionally till you cry. Effy is just a fun person, but can be a lot to handle and even if you think she can't be serious, but she can. When she's sad you may cry because it might something extremely horrible if it makes her cry, she'll usually shade her feelings with humor instead of making the whole room feel solemn.

    She has a great heart and she really enjoys the company, also how welcoming people are. Although if you cross her she'll get smart and turn everything around to make that problem you cause, bite you in the butt. She'll also hold a grudge, but will let go of it if you kind enough to earn her trust and friendship. Plus she's hopeless romantic wanting that special person, but can't seem to keep a hold on the ones she likes, but its only because she just likes them, not really to point of true love.

    To sum up her personality, she's fun, kind, a dash of mean and pot of loving love, she's just a semi-regular gal and loves to be that way.


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FAMILY & POSSESSIONS
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    FATHER:Charley Chance Abney, fifty.

    Charley Abney is a French wizard, his profession is an Auror. He's quite okay, which is him saying and being quite modest because others believe he's very good or great at his job. Charley adores his children and dearly misses his lost daughter who was found three years ago, but decided to leave her be for her remaining Hogwarts years.

    MOTHER:Minny Abney (née Cranberry), forty-seven.

    Minny Abney is a french Half-Veela wizard, a professional journalist, she writes past adventures of herself, which are sort of autobiographies, but she replaced some peoples names for the asked to do so. She's a loving and supportive mother being that she supports her son Gabrielle and his homosexual orientation as well do the others in the house holds. She's a quite experienced wizard, but doesn't want to brag.

    SIBLING(S):
    >Victory Abney
    >Dixie Mary Abney
    >Bliss Louise Abney
    >Trinity Hale Abney
    >Gabriel Alexander Abney
    >Yvette Belcourt(Lost, found, but left till seventh years over| Nobody told Effy because they knew she'd blab.)


    OTHER: N/A

    BLOOD STATUS: Pureblood

    RACE: Half-Veela.

    SOCIAL STATUS: Between Wealthy and Middle Class.

    PET(S):
    >Calico cat.

    BROOMSTICK():
    >Broken broomstick, has yet to replace.

    OTHER POSSESSIONS:None.


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CHARACTER HISTORY
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    Early Years: When born Effy was a good child and had a normal childhood in wizard standard. When she was born, she had a twin who was stolen and taken to a muggle adoption agency where she was adopted and Effy's parents got extremely saddened and would hardly pay attention to the daughter they had till Effy hit her talking ages and her parents accepted their stolen child.

    During her years of being able to move with full effort she would work hard some times, but stubborn when told to do something she didn't f feel like doing at the moment and tended to get her way while other family members acted politely or just a little well mannered. At age seven she'd been told about all the wizarding abilities she'd obtain and it would become a sport of hers to do wandless magic which later led to her perfecting this art as a young adult.

    After the age of nine she'd be starting to behave better, but not really. She'd act goofy at times, but always come out as a bright child. Although she'd be acting in inappropriate manors, such as,act dumb minded just to humor herself. Effy at eleven was sorted into Ravenclaw surprising many, but her older siblings because she was always her true, smart self. Generally her life during one to eleven has yet to be exciting or filled with drama.

    Hogwarts Years:
    Year one: Effy was accepted into Ravenclaw just like her other siblings. She excelled well in athletic fields. She passed several classes with flying colors, but would act out or draw attention to herself even though Effy's intentions were to entertain herself. She'd impress her teachers with her with her spell casting. Her good performance in school led her to be a number one student for that year.

    Year two: During the second year Effy would try to be good student, proving to be the perfect little girl and act snobby, but would catch her actions at times. Her know-it-all attitude made her hated in this year, but respected by the Slytherin student so she'd start to hang around them and teachers debated on her switching houses, but the headmaster wouldn't allow it. Once she'd been realizing how devious Slytherin students have become she'd stand up for their victims and destroy her friendship status with Slytherin. This would also start her hatred for Slytherin.

    Year three: The beginning of the year started well, she'd begin to develop friendships and her body would also develop through puberty. Her changes caused her attraction to increase, she'd get more attention and be stared at.

    After a while, three months really the Slytherins would make fun of her mainly to spite her because of Effy "betraying" them. Effy later plotted against them using her popularity, which was given to by her growing details and would get her group of friends to humiliate the opposing group of Slytherin students. After that her rude, but clever behavior ended up making her praised by some others.

    Once the year ended Effy had improved her skill in magical feilds.

    Year four: Effy after realizing her athletic abilities she started to in role herself into the Quidditch team and she excelled in this extremely well, winning many for her house. Effy also created a interest in animals, but doesn't have a major connection with them, not really a horse whisperer.

    A few weeks in she got the opportunity to date and she was ask to be someones girlfriend and she accepted because all the through her years at Hogwarts even at the ripe age of eleven she wanted a relationship and she got it. It lasted a while, but Effy didn't want to get to close, she started to break this guys heart before he broke hers. She wasn't cruel, but she wasn't nice about it either.

    Later that year on Christmas she received her pet cat, Cammi who she adores to death and would take bullet or a killing spell for this animal. She created a close bond with this cat and one day it was hidden from her turned the dorm room upside down for this animal, completely trashed till she found out her roommates pranked her and she didn't speak to them for a few weeks.

    The last day of school Effy looked back on this year and would cry happily of her accomplishments, in private of course.

    Year five: Fifth year Effy came goofball and all, going back to her old ways and feeling happy, sometimes on accident she'd get a laugh out of people. Once getting settled she'd thought this year would be a great year her being fifteen and in almost a few years she'd be considered an adult. Ecstatic Effy entered this year wonderfully happy and no intention of enemies, but trouble followed at all corners with green ties.

    After being in Quidditch for a while Effy didn't know that she'd break her broom and she did, then decided to hang up her broom and start studying or something, but it didn't go well with her. She asked for a broom, but her parents thought because of the last time she was Quidditch was time she broke her broom and she broke it by falling to the ground so they told her no more of it. She was mad, but accepted the thought and she knew her parents were only doing this because they cared and didn't want to to lose another daughter.

    Then a while after she again was asked to be in a relationship and she went along on it quite well and decided to open her mind to this and not care if this one was going to hurt her. She just wanted to know what heartbreak felt first so that she can prepare for it later and she did when this person cheated in an awful way, let say not appropriate for a young boy. This was hard on Effy, but she got over it and was proud of doing so.

    Weeks or so after her heartbreak the battle between Effy and the Snakes(what she calls them) continued for a while this year and she had no plan of destroying them or just playing around with a little teasing. She just came in happy and willing to set a side differences, but the Snakes were still grudging over her and didn't want to separate the feud.

    After their plotting the Snakes had mastered their plan of embarrassment, but Effy had foiled their plan by being a clever young lady and becoming a little tattle tail to a professor. This professor took immediate action against the student and Effy was happy about this, but she knew that this meant an big war would come of this.

    Year six: Like last year Effy arrived goofy and free spirited, but also brought her devious self so she'd be prepared for her enemies. Like always a plot against Effy started and like always Effy crushed this plot. This year the war was quick because Effy was fast and just a bit smarter then the Slytherin students. Effy after she won this war for now had looked back on her Hogwarts years and saw that she had spent most of it on the Slytherin, she'd seen that she wasted good time on them and could have had more relationships that could have lasted.

    So when the Snakes had another plot she let it go on, but this one was bad and they horrified her by doing harsh treatment with words and Effy couldn't take much of hit and she dashed away. She never knew they had it in them, but Effy should have prepared herself. They hit her hard and something you can't explain( I'm not really wanting to), it was mean just to really sum it up.

    Her sixth year was horrid and she walked around sad and everyone felt a bit back because Effy was a strong character and didn't show an emotion other then happy or angry. It was surprising to all and many tried to comfort her, but she wouldn't let them get near her for she didn't want to cry in front of them.

    So on the last day Effy had reached the point of depression that some people would still make fun of her for this and repeat these thing. She later stood up for herself and sucked up her pitiful behavior to become stronger then she was before.

    Seventh year: Today Effy is a hard working student confused about her future job and such. Although she's almost and adult Effy is a child at heart sadly. She still acts crazy and caring, still wanting that special person to come along, but doesn't want to completely waste her time on that. The feud between the group of Slytherin has stop for the remaining time, but Effy doesn't seem to believe they stopped their bickering, but at the moment both sides are dormant.

    This year also Effy has started up on nonverbal magic and is getting very good at this, but not extremely well. She enjoys the challenge because she wants something to do for her last year so she feels she's learn something. This year to Effy seems to be a good year to her and she's enjoying it.

    Adulthood: Yet to be an adult.


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BEHIND THE CHARACTER
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    YOUR NAME: Reed

    RP EXPERIENCE: Enough.

    HOW YOU FOUND US: Same way I did before.

    OTHER CHARACTERS: Yvette Belcourt

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Post by Khaat Lupin Thu Dec 30, 2010 3:18 am

A couple of things. Wandless magic, on PA, is only granted to a limited number of graduates. She would not have that as a strength at this point. She might have interest in it, but she wouldn't likely be excelling at it, at this point. Not likely that she would be doing much with that at this point. Its more of how this site deals with the whole magical abilities question.

Nonverbal magic is somewhat the same way. Students can begin to study that in their 7th year, but it is unlikely that it would be a strength until sometime after she became a grad. She could begin her studies on that, perhaps.

I do, however, like how well developed she is. Your app is very thorough. I do need you to work on doing something with those abilities though. She can probably apply for them again once she has a bit of time under her belt as a grad when she graduates.

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Post by Elizabeth "Effy" Abney Thu Dec 30, 2010 3:21 am

Alright I'll fix it up and I'll fix up and I'll google all the crap for when I update it one day or something.

So you don't need me to the change the history right?
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Post by Khaat Lupin Thu Dec 30, 2010 3:30 am

You will have to take out the wandless magic references and the nonverbal magic references. The rest of it looks pretty good.
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Post by Yvette Belcourt Thu Dec 30, 2010 3:30 am

I shall do so! Hopefully I won't take too long.
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Post by Elizabeth "Effy" Abney Thu Dec 30, 2010 3:36 am

I might not have gotten it all, but I probably got most of it and I'll go over it again just to be sure.
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Post by Khaat Lupin Fri Dec 31, 2010 1:22 am

You're all good except the first sentence of the last paragraph of your Hogwarts history where you refer back to nonverbal and wandless magic. Once you fix that, I can accept you.

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Post by Elizabeth "Effy" Abney Fri Dec 31, 2010 1:32 am

I think I got it.
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Post by Khaat Lupin Fri Dec 31, 2010 2:03 am

OK. you're good. accepted and sorted into ravenclaw
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