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on Sun Nov 14, 2010 6:39 pm
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CHARACTER FULL NAME: Ace Maximus______________________________________________________________________________________

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INTRODUCTION
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FULL NAME: Ace Maximus

NICKNAMES: Ace

AGE: 13

ALLEGIANCE: Hogwarts

HOGWARTS HOUSE: Gryffindor, Ravenclaw

WAND TYPE: 9'in Rose Wood

PLAY BY: Ace


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APPEARANCE
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HAIR COLOR: bold hair

EYE COLOR: Light Hazle

HEIGHT: 5'10

BODY TYPE: Slender

GENERAL APPEARANCE: Ace always wears a hoody. Ace wears gloves that the finger tips are cut off. Ace has a chain connected to his pants. Ace chooses to wear DC brand sneakers. Ace's hoody is always black. Ace's skin tone is a very light tan that makes his skin look like it's gold.
Ace wears long dark colored jeans to match his hoody and he wears a very nice t-shirt sometimes dark with a design or just a white t.

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PERSONALITY
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CHARACTER STRENGTHS AND SKILLS:
His intelligence that helps him find many ways out of problems

His ability to see things with his mind and formulat quick plans

His bravery and speed help a lot

CHARACTER WEAKNESSES:
Being made center of attention

His anger makes him lose control of everything

When girls seduce him and when he is disrespected

CHARACTER LIKES:
He likes girls hoping to find a partner to fight alongside him

He loves the holidays and his friends

Sweet foods, and great towns that are always live

CHARACTER DISLIKES:
Slytherin and the jerks that bully all people around him

Feeling left out and not being brought along to parties and friend gatherings

Feeling lost and not knowing anything and no one will tell him whats going on

GOALS:
To become a very strong wizard and to protect the weak

To defeat the slytherin in the broom cup games

To learn many spells and to become a wizard of light and a pyromancer


QUIRKS:
Starts to gasp out of randomness when extremelly bored

starts to tap on anything when anxious


BOGGART:
Being eatin by a giant spider

PATRONUS:

DEMENTOR:
Watching the death of his own family and running fo his life

AMORENTIA:
The smell of great food

MIRROR OF ERISED:
To obtain revenge for his familie's death

PERSONALITY: Ace has a very kind personality. Ace goes out of his way help others but he chooses not to open up to anyone and keeps his life a secret. Ace defends his friends and doesn't care if he dies because he is still haunted by the horrible memory of his families death. Ace listens to everyone and understands what they say and always gives out counceling. Whenever Ace finds someone on the street he gives them money so that they can buy some food or clothes. When bored he naturally sits under a tre and looks around and just goes to sleep.


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FAMILY & POSSESSIONS
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FATHER: Tank Maximus

MOTHER: Karina Maximus

SIBLINGS: Ducky & Jeff Maximus

OTHER: none

BLOOD STATUS: Pureblood

RACE: Human

SOCIAL STATUS: Middle Class

PET: Wolf cub


BROOMSTICK: none


OTHER POSSESSIONS: Chain passed down through generations of Ace's family



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CHARACTER HISTORY
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Early Years: When Ace was five his family was slaughtered. Ace ran away but took the family chain along with him. One day a man found him named Tank Maximus. Tank adopted him and something was wrong. He noticed that the boy was a wizard. Ace's Powers showed at the age of 7. Ace's family learned to live with this and so at the age of eleven they found a school where he could hone his magical powers.

Hogwarts Years: Ace was a very silent student. Ace chose not to open up to anyone. Until one day at Hogwarts he met Sora Ultimax and they became friends. After that Ace's life started to shine. His powers started to become stronger as days passed by him and he enjoyed life even more. Ace had a girlfriend, she loved Ace with all her heart and ace loved her back. They did almost everything together until the day she was abducted and turned into a spider queen. After that Ace said it wouldn't work out between them and she tried to kill him but he use his pyromancer abilities to kill her.

Adulthood: After Hogwarts Ace returned to the human world in search for the person that killed his family. It took him 3 years before anyone told him that the man was already dead. After that Ace was so happy to hear that, that he returned the family chain to the rightful owner his dead brother. Ace knew he no longer needed it so he just gave it back, he promised to only take it back if he ever needed it again. So then a great evil rised and Ace took back the chain he knew it would protect him against the great evil and he knew he would need it to amplify his powers to defeat it.


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BEHIND THE CHARACTER
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YOUR NAME: Albert

RP EXPERIENCE: None

HOW YOU FOUND US: My buddy Sora Ultimax told me

OTHER CHARACTERS: None

RP SAMPLE: Ace was so amazed at the sight of Hogwarts. Sure Ace didnt know a single person but he was so suprised at everything. Ace was walking through the hall and accidentally bumped into a Slytherin. "Oh, Im sorry I wasnt watching where i was going," said Ace. "Well watch where you walk next time or else," replied the Slytherin. "Well excuse me..... how bout you shut up and dont mess with me or else ill burn you," Ace said. "Big words for a newbie. HAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!," exclaimed the Slytherin. Then Ace use fire to melt the Slytherins shoes to the ground and walked away and went to the opening ceremony. Already Ace has created some enemies. He wasnt afraid he knew he could take them all.



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Last edited by Ace Maximus on Sun Dec 05, 2010 3:05 pm; edited 14 times in total
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on Sun Nov 14, 2010 8:46 pm
Your link to your picture takes me to a blank page. Can you copy and paste a picture of your character there instead? And fix the coding on your app, please?

Thanks!
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on Sun Nov 28, 2010 7:51 pm
Ace,

We give members two weeks to finish their app. Please finish yours by Dec. 5th. If you have difficulty, please let us know. We're always happy to help.

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Ace Maximus Empty Re: Ace Maximus

on Sun Nov 28, 2010 8:48 pm
i have a problem with getting the picture
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on Sun Nov 28, 2010 8:53 pm
Me too. Your link shows me nothing but an error message.

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on Mon Nov 29, 2010 12:41 am
Maybe cos it's a facebook picture? If the person has their preferences set to private, you shouldn't be able to see it.

Besides, you shouldn't be using a facebook picture for your play-by.

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on Sun Dec 05, 2010 3:06 pm
i think i fixed it can you guys check it now?
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on Sun Dec 05, 2010 3:48 pm
ok, the history section does not work for me. it is very unrealistic for this site. we dont' do anything here w/ being on both sides of life and death. Please loose this part of the history and make him only on this side of life, and not having visited the "other side." Also, the history is unrealistic for a 13 year old. please try reframing him as a normal 13 year old. if you need help, let me know.

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Ace Maximus Empty Re: Ace Maximus

on Sun Dec 05, 2010 8:50 pm
what do you mean
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on Sun Dec 05, 2010 9:05 pm
Well let me explain,
You don't need to do Graduate years.
Also it is very unlikely that you have a wolf cub as a pet, so if you could change that.
Pyromancer's do not exist in the Harry Potter universe, neither do Light wizards. We don't categorize wizard classes and things like that.
Also, it is nearly impossible that his girlfriend was turned into a Spider Queen. So if you could change that as well.
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