KINGSLEY, Zoey

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KINGSLEY, Zoey

Post by Zoey Kingsley on Wed May 03, 2017 3:09 am

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They were the last people you'd expect to be involved in anything strange or mysterious, because they just didn't hold with such nonsense
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† †Character's Legal Name: Zoey Amelia Kingsley

† †Age: 14

† †Hogwarts House: Ravenclaw

† †Blood Type: Halfblood

† †Species: Human

† †Face claim: Victoria Justice
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APPEARANCE
...Aunt Petunia often said that Dudley looked like a baby angel - Harry often said that Dudley looked like a pig in a wig
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Zoey is a tiny little Italian girl with tan skin, long dark hair and dark brown eyes. Most people say her cheekbones are her most prominent feature. She is kind of short but hopes to get taller as she gets older.
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PERSONALITY
......If only the hat had mentioned a house for people who felt a bit queasy, that would have been the one for him
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Zoey is a huge fan of art. She loves to draw and paint and do phtography. She hopes to one day attend a muggle art school in New York City in America. She also loves to fly. She is a huge quidditch fan and hopes to one day make her house team before she graduates. She also has a great sense of fashion and enjoys helping her friends with their looks and wardrobe choices. She sees herself as a fashionista always ahead of the trends. Zoey does not like to be bossed around. SHe hates being told what to do by other people. Being told to do something makes her want to do it even less than she did before. She also hates failing at things. Zoey likes to see herself at very smart and when she fails at something it aggravates her. Zoey also dislikes fake people bullies. She cant stop people who think they are better than others. Zoey is an extremely loyal girl with strong family oriented values. She is honest and tries her best at life. She tries to learn as much as she can about the world and all it has to offer. She has a bit of an ego and doesnt really mind it. She has a weakness for learning all she can. She also has a weak spot for her family and will do all she can to protect her. She is very intelligent and tries to soak up as much information about the world as she could. She is considered to be attractive by others and a nice person in general. She is friendly and loyal to everyone she cares about. She can be brutaly honest at times, on the verge of bluntness.She can get jealous and posessive when she is in a relationship. She has a sarcastic sense of humor and can be stubborn as a bull.

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HISTORY
..................Hey! My eyes aren't 'glistening with the ghosts of my past'!
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† †Early Years:
Zoey was a loud and rambunctious young girl growing up. She was always told that she had the soul of a true Italian. She was always getting into trouble and poking her nose in other peoples business. She got the nickname Nosy Zoey from her cousin Lillian when she was 6. She received her Hogwarts letter during a family reunion so the whole family threw her a big party.


† †Hogwarts Years:
When Zoey first arrived at Hogwarts, she was kind of scared, but also very excited. She couldn't wait to learn all the school had to offer, but she was afraid she wouldn't make any friends. Within her first week, she had a few close friends and was even taken under the wing of an older student named Rebekah Lockwood. She was happy to be at the school and wished she could stay there all year long. Zoey became a hyperactive teenage girl with a mind filled with a million thoughts at once. She was always moving around trying to absorb knowledge from the castle and the paintings, always listening to their stories when she wasnt in class or closed up in the corner of a library studying for exams or doing homework.

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Out of Character
I'm Harry's half-sister, Dumbledore's daughter, Voldemort's niece, Sirius' cousin, Snape's daughter and Lupin's great grandmother...
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† †What should we call you: Sydney

† †RP Experience: 5+ years

† †How you found us: already a member

† †Main Character (we'll PM you on this account): Tessa Di Angelo
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Last edited by Zoey Kingsley on Wed May 03, 2017 3:18 pm; edited 1 time in total
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Re: KINGSLEY, Zoey

Post by Robert Lupin on Wed May 03, 2017 3:56 am

Hey, Syd!

Been reading your apps. I think there might be a problem with the ages between Zoey and Rebekah. You talk about Rebekah being a 3rd yr when Zoey is a 1st yr but you only make them one year apart in age. At best, its a really hard stretch to make that work. You might want to re-think that piece and determine how you want to correct that, because that will make at least one of the apps a bit different.

And, I know its been a bit, but please remember we don't generally accept extremes in much of anything and you have "extremely" used repeatedly in her personality. I do need you to soften those things, please.

Thanks!
K.

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Re: KINGSLEY, Zoey

Post by Zoey Kingsley on Wed May 03, 2017 3:19 pm

I fixed both of those things. The age thing was a typo on my part. Rebekah is meant to be 16, not 15. 6th year. ZOey is a 4th year.
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Re: KINGSLEY, Zoey

Post by Robert Lupin on Thu May 04, 2017 12:33 am

definitely better. thank you.

accepted and sorted to ravenclaw!

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