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Seventh Year Slytherin
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Dariela McLaggen
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McLaggen, Dariela Amelia

on Tue Apr 11, 2017 10:28 am
           
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They were the last people you'd expect to be involved in anything strange or mysterious, because they just didn't hold with such nonsense
   
   

   Character's Legal Name: Dariela Amelia McLaggen

   Age: 16

   Hogwarts House: Slytherin

   Blood Type:  Pureblood

   Species: human

   Face claim: Haley Lu Richardson
   
   



               
APPEARANCE
...Aunt Petunia often said that Dudley looked like a baby angel - Harry often said that Dudley looked like a pig in a wig
   
   

Mia is tall girl, among the tallest in her class. She loves that, especially because she was very short when she was younger. Since she entered puberty she started wearing high heels. Her natural hair color is blonde but it is likely to change soon. She has a hope that she is still young and that her body is still developing, she is athletic but she is aware of the fact that probably she will never have the prominent curves.  She looks like a model, she hates it when people tell her that she needs to gain weight needs because she loves how she looks now. Her eyes color is green just like her mother's eyes and she is proud of that. She loves to wear clothing that helps that she looks older than she really is. She noticed that if she cares about what she wears, most of people think that she is at least two years older.
Because of her blond hair she looks softer and more fragile, which is completely opposite to her personality.
She often dresses provocatively in defiance of her parents, and teachers. On the other hand, she likes attention she gets from boysbecause of her look and she enjoys in that.
   
   



               
PERSONALITY
......If only the hat had mentioned a house for people who felt a bit queasy, that would have been the one for him
   
   

Mia is a classic teenager. She hates school, parents, and every form of authority. On the other hand, she loves fun, good weather, flirting and every aspect of the recovery. She is capricious, headstrong and often others say she's rude and maybe even evil, but she is not. She is often spiteful and sarcastic towards those who annoyed her. As the youngest child in the family she was accustomed to get everything she wants, her parents fulfilled every wish which she has and she is of the opinion that she should be a princess and the whole world her kingdom that she obeys. She loves herself, and probably has too much confidence. Mia is irresponsible, noisy and sometimes hyperactive therefore she is not favorite to teachers, but she is really smart and a good student. Her parents consider she is quite irresponsible, because her whole world revolves around friends, entertainment, gossip, boys and the like. She is childish, but a good friend. Although she seems cold and unapproachable, she will always help friends when is necessary, she is willing to listen to others and to give them advice.She likes to challenge parents to see where is their boundaries . She is ready to dye her hair in green, do piercings and wear a sick short dress just to get them upset. Although she is the youngest and has received the most attention, she is sick jealous of her brother and all he has, every gift and token of attentions from the parents.
She often says first thing comes to her mind without thinking about the consequences. She likes to joke, even though her jokes sometimes cruel and offensive.
She wants to be rich. The imagination that has a large family, a huge mansion, a lot of kids and a nanny who keeps them.
A person who has almost everything she wants, and she is very hard to surprise and keep her attention for more than 5 minutes. All is short interesting for her. She is afraid of insects but do not tell anyone because she considered that is a purely female fear. She does not want to ever prove she is a weak person.
All in all, as I said, a classic teenager.
   
   



               
HISTORY
..................Hey! My eyes aren't 'glistening with the ghosts of my past'!
   
   

   Early Years:  Dariela Amelia (do not call her Dariela or Amelia, never, she will kill you) was born on April 19th.
Although it is hard to believe, as a kid she was a very quiet, shy and obedient girl. She enjoyed the most attention of her parents, and soon she became rude and spoiled. She had a very happy childhood, a lot of dreams come true for her (like the trip to Disneyland), even though later those dreams she considered stupid. Nothing was interested to her for more than 10 minutes. She tried a lot of sports, she had a lot of pets but none of it satisfied her. She was traveling a lot, and from an early age she learned to love the cities, as well as to appreciate art. Even if she has an older half-brother she never really pay attention when we talk about him. They were never close and Mia want it to stay on that way.

   Hogwarts Years: The first year at Hogwarts was the most difficult for her. She could not get used to the fact that she was away from home, at night she was crying and refused to make friends with anyone. Her life boiled down to the classes she had to attend, eating, homework and sleep.
At the beginning of the second year was accustomed to the inevitable; she was stuck here for a while, so she needed to get the best of the situation. She started to hang out and gained a lot of friends. She began to enjoy, but was still shy and withdrawn to some extent. The teachers loved her because in the class she was quiet, she followed the lectures and was really active.
At the end of the third and beginning of the fourth year she occurred dark time called puberty. Mia had became arrogant, sarcastic and restless. She started paying less attention to the teacher lectures, she began to dress in provocative clothes and every day tried to look for a new way to make her parents and teachers angry. Mia likes to think that in the last three years she built her personality and become the person she will be in the future.
Now, her life revolves around the boring lectures, friends, fun and penalties that always gets.
That's it for now, she is on the sixth year. Others things and memories will happen in the future.

   After Hogwarts: Still at school.
   
   



               
Out of Character
I'm Harry's half-sister, Dumbledore's daughter, Voldemort's niece, Sirius' cousin, Snape's daughter and Lupin's great grandmother...
   
   

   What should we call you: Nadia

   RP Experience: enough, I think

   How you found us: already here

   Main Character (we'll PM you on this account): probably Charlotte
   
   



OPTIONAL EXTRAS
Let us slip into the night and pursue that flighty temptress, adventure

Personal Information

Nickname/s: Mia

Date of Birth: 19. 04. 2014

Gender: female

Sexuality:  bisexual

Current Address: Hogwarts?

Social Status: Upper class




Currently

Fears: It can be said that her biggest fear of death . She is afraid that she would die young. Her second biggest fear is from insects. In addition, she is afraid of blood. She is quite sure that it is able to kill the doctors who try to take her blood.

Traits:
+ Adventurous
+ Amiable (sometimes)
+ Athletic
+ Balanced
+ Brilliant
+ Capable
+ Challenging
+ Charming
+ Cheerful (most of time)
+ Clean
+ Creative
+ Curious
+ Dignified
+ Earnest
+ Elegant
+ Eloquent
+ Energetic
+ Honest
+ Humorous
+ Imaginative
+ Independent
+ Spontaneous

- Undisciplined
- Unfriendly
- Unstable
- Vindictive
- Willful
- Thoughtless
- Superficial
- Shallow
- Selfish
- Pugnacious
- Presumptuous
- Narcissistic
- Impulsive
- Excitable
- Cynical
- Critical
- Childish

Likes:
+ Summer
+ Entertainment
+ Alcohol
+ Cigarette
+ Family (although she would never admit THAT)
+ Music
+ Art
+ Fashion
+ Rain
+ Jogging
+ Cars
+ Travels
+ Perfumes
+ Camping
+ Stuffed animals

Dislikes:
- Winter
- Coca Cola
- Books
- Learning
- School
- Naive people
- Insects
- Striking jewelry
- Bright lipstick
- Cats

Idiosyncrasies: Always carries a small mirror and lipstick in pocket.
Spinning a strand of hair around her finger when she's nervous or when lying.
Before learning she always running for 10 minutes because she thinks it will help her better remembered. It is not a successful method, but she still continues to work.
Mia always eats separately. For example,  first eats meat, then the attachments and then salad.

Goals: Mia is a person that is not overly interested in the future and therefore doesn't have particular goals.For now, her goal is  possibly to escape from the school, or at least to survive schooling.




Other People

Significant Other/s: /

Children: /

Biological Mother: Elisa Evans-McLaggen

Biological Father: Cormac McLaggen

Siblings: Axel McLaggen

Other Family Members: /

Important Friends: Charlotte Waldorf, Darian Levski, Gia

Does your character look up to anyone? /

Does your character particularly dislike anyone? /



Last edited by Dariela McLaggen on Thu Apr 13, 2017 9:14 am; edited 1 time in total
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Re: McLaggen, Dariela Amelia

on Wed Apr 12, 2017 10:40 am
I think she is done.
Please live this to Selwyn since we spoke about her
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Re: McLaggen, Dariela Amelia

on Thu Apr 13, 2017 3:25 am
Okay, I'm sorry I didn't get to this earlier, I didn't realise you were waiting for me specifically.

I think the app is good, but I'd like you to revise a the appearance part to make it more from her point of view. For example, instead of saying "people often tell her she needs to gain weight"  try "she hates it when people tell her she needs to gain weight"  and particularly at the end, I recommend rephrasing the last sentence to be more about how much she likes getting attention from boys than about how boys like the way she looks.

PM me if you need any help  Smile
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Re: McLaggen, Dariela Amelia

on Thu Apr 13, 2017 9:14 am
Fixed, tell me if you need me to fix anything else
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Re: McLaggen, Dariela Amelia

on Mon Apr 17, 2017 7:36 am
okay, I'll just sort her out for you.
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