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Re: DELACOUR, Cirilla Fleur

on Sat Oct 08, 2016 6:55 am
I have removed everything that was an issue, and have added a couple of things to her character as well. Apologies for the double post.
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Re: DELACOUR, Cirilla Fleur

on Sat Oct 08, 2016 3:09 pm
Oh, you are so very welcome. My brain tends to work like yours does. I can accept change if I understand exactly what needs to be changed, and for me, it is more important to know why I need to change. In the workplace, I am so blessed now to have employers and coworkers who get that, and, man, is that ever refreshing! So, believe me, I do get it. I think that's why I felt I needed to explain things a bit. I'm so glad it helped.

Anyway, I like Cirilla. As I read her, Slytherin or not, I think she'd get on well with my 7th year, Andrew Diamond. His Gryffindor-ness would not be offended at her Slytherin-ness. LOL. We should seriously consider that. If she can still climb trees, he would be her best mate! He hasn't found anyone that enjoys that other than a few adult mentors and family members that he sees on breaks.

I like her a lot. You've made exactly the changes I needed to see, so thank you for that. Now, she seems, to me, to shine on her own, and that's exactly what I was hoping you'd do. I think she's going to be a lot of fun not just for you but for other players too.

I am happy to accept her now and sort her into Slytherin. And do consider whether you'd like to do a thread with her and Andrew Diamond. (Yeah, his app is outdated, but feel free to read it if you like)

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