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Tyrath, Avrae

on Thu Aug 04, 2016 3:23 am


AVRAE TYRATH
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INTRODUCTION
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NICKNAMES/ALIAS: Avrae Ray

AGE: 17

ALLEGIANCE: Neutral

HOGWARTS HOUSE:

WAND: Chestnut / Unicorn Tail Hair / 9 ˝ inches

PLAY BY: Elle Fanning

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APPEARANCE
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GENERAL APPEARANCE: Avrae has a general appearance of always being bright. Her clothes are usually in a bright color or pure white. She's short for her age, skinny, and small boned. She doesn't seem to take up much space and as a result people glance over her or don't see her at all. Her hair is a light almost white blonde, and she has blue/grey eyes.

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PERSONALITY
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TRAITS:
Positive: Artistic, Hard working, Not easy to anger

Negative: Stoic, Gets lost in her own thoughts, Single-minded.

LIKES & DISLIKES:
Likes: Dragons / Magical Creatures, Silk / Fine fabrics, Traveling

Dislikes: Losing things, Getting dirty, Dark colors

GOAL: Work in the Ministry of Magic in the Department for the Regulation and Control of Magical Creatures.

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FAMILY & POSSESSIONS
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FATHER: Killian Tyrath – Wizard – worked in St. Mungos as a janitor.

MOTHER: Destiny Tyrath – Muggleborn Witch – Met Killian at Hogwarts, and works currently as a store-keeper in Diagon Alley.

SIBLING/S: N/A

OTHER: Animals: A white cat named Slytha who goes to school with Avrae.

SPECIES/BLOODTYPE: Human

SOCIAL STATUS: Lower – Middle Class.

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CHARACTER HISTORY
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EARLY YEARS:Avrae's entire childhood was firmly seated in the wizarding world. She grew up either playing around Diagon Alley, or following her father around St. Mungos. Her family didn't make enough money to send her to a baby-sitter and they usually worked similar hours, though Killian often had to work nights and late evenings, in which Avrae stayed with her mother in Diagon Alley. Growing up in these areas, Avrae knew her place in the world, and took everything in with wide eyes and a growing interest in what she could find out.

She spent many of her days in the bookstores, and even picked up a bit of loose change every so often by helping out in the different stores along the road, becoming friends with many of the shop-keepers and frequent guests of the road. Though she spent much of her time in the different book stores around, not always the most populated and popular ones either, but some that were found down back allies that no many people knew about.

HOGWARTS YEARS: In Hogwarts, Avrae let her single minded behavior towards certain things help propel her into high grades and figuring out what she wanted to do for the rest of her life. She spent much of her time in the library, learning about different things and pushing her own knowledge. Now in her 7th and final year, Avrae is sure she wants to work in the Department for the Regulation and Control of Magical Creatures.

ADULTHOOD: Hasn't begun yet.

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OUT OF CHARACTER
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ALSO KNOWN AS: Chase / Molz

RP EXPERIENCE: Quite a bit, over 10 years now.

HOW YOU FOUND US: Used to play as Chase Moor and a variety of other characters.

MAIN CHARACTER: N/A Currently.


Last edited by Avrae Tyrath on Thu Aug 04, 2016 3:04 pm; edited 1 time in total
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Re: Tyrath, Avrae

on Thu Aug 04, 2016 4:07 am
Hey Chase. Just a couple of tiny things need edits.

Firstly, "seems to have an uncanny ability to completely disappear" - I know what you mean, but just for clarity, it would be great if you could either rephrase this or just delete it (I notice you reiterate in the next sentence anyway) so it sounds less magical power-y.

I'm a little worried about the way you specify the lack of nuance in both her expression and intonation. It's going to be really hard for other people to RP with this character if their characters can't get context cues from at least one of those things. I'd like you to choose between them.

Materialistic is usually considered a negative trait, as far as I'm aware. Could you explain for me why it's good?

And single minded and obsessive are different things (you can just add it to the list if you like). Single minded implies determined to get things done, whereas obsessive implies things need to be done in a certain way or habits that arise from certain obsessions.

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Re: Tyrath, Avrae

on Thu Aug 04, 2016 3:04 pm
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Re: Tyrath, Avrae

on Thu Aug 04, 2016 10:15 pm
Great, and sorted to Hufflepuff.
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