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CAVANAH, Nadia

on Sat Mar 26, 2016 11:07 am

NADIA CAVANAH
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INTRODUCTION
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NICKNAMES/ALIAS:  none

AGE: 27
ALLEGIANCE: neutral 
Irish

HOGWARTS HOUSE: Ravenclaw or Gryffindor
WAND: ivy,  kelpie hair, 14"  flexibily

PLAY BY: Milica Pavlovic
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APPEARANCE
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GENERAL APPEARANCE: The average height, athletic body and dark complexion make Nadia very beautiful girl.
Her blue eyes are a great contrast to her complexion and dark brown, almost black hair.
Nadia loves high heels and fashionable clothes; successfully combines elegant and usually to create something that suits her.

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PERSONALITY
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TRAITS: Positive: smart, charming, friendly
Negative: arrogant, manipulative sometimes, stubborn

LIKES & DISLIKES: Likes: coffe, alcohol, car racing, adventures, rainy days
Dislikes: her family, people who always late, girls who pretends like their look is only important thing

GOAL: to get merried and have her own family
to become profesional cars racer 

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FAMILY & POSSESSIONS
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FATHER: Braden Cavanah

MOTHER: Bedelia Cavanah

SIBLING/S: Sonia Cavanah
Nadir Cavanah

OTHER: /

SPECIES/BLOODTYPE: human/muggleborn

SOCIAL STATUS: Middle Class

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CHARACTER HISTORY
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EARLY YEARS: Nadia is the youngest of three children in the family Cavanah.
When she was only four years old, her family decided to move to London because her dad got a new job.
Nadia had always been a neglected child, left to herself.
After two children, her parents seem to lose interest in the third child. In addition, they often complained because Nadia acted almost as a boy, she was not interested in Barbies but with her older brother played with cars, or climbed on trees.
When Nadia was five years old, strange things started happening around her.
Sometimes, when she was angry, she slammed the door without touching them or broke the bowl with flowers.
Her parents were confused, how could this happen in their perfectly normal family, to their perfectly normal daughter?
The answer came six years later when Nadia received a letter from Hogwarts.
She was a witch.
Nadia did not know what to think about it, the witches existed only in fairytales and now she got a letter that she was enrolled in a large school for witches and wizards.

HOGWARTS YEARS:   Nadia loved school, although her parents were not.
It was a shame for the father architect and a mother lawyer.
Therefore, during the school Nadia almost did not have contact with her family and sibilings.
At school, however, a good fit. She had a lot of friends, like her, happy because she is not freak, just special.
Even if on the first Nadia was scared because it seemed as though all the children already know about the magic, Nadia realized that it is not difficult, it only takes a willingness to learn.
Of course, she hated some theoretical subjects such as history of magic, but was excellent in charms and potions.
In contrast, she hated defense against the dark arts.The reason was simple; everyone, including teachers and students here had looked too good to use magic for something bad.
Although she loved Quidditch, had never been in team but she was a great support to her home.

ADULTHOOD: After school, it was clear that she could not return to her family who thinks that she is a freak.
For this reason, she moved back to Ireland where she worked for several years as a journalist.
During the life in Ireland, Nadia realized that she wants to travel.
For this reason, she volunteered to write a newspaper article about America which meant she should live there for six months.
Everything was perfect, she met America and understand what it is the American dream.
One day, in an ordinary club she met a guy who liked her.
His name was Nathaniel, and she soon learned he takes part in street racing. Nadia was fascinated with the way the car goes through corners, to avoid another car for millimeter and remain on the road in spite of everything.
For that reason, she decided to learn to drive like Nathaniel.
Of course, never become as good as he but she wishes to be once.
When she was 26 years old, decided to return to London to continue with her life and maybe find a job related to magic, although by the end of the school magic used rarely, only when it was necessary.




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OUT OF CHARACTER
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ALSO KNOWN AS: Nadia

RP EXPERIENCE: +7 years

HOW YOU FOUND US: Google search

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Last edited by Nadia Cavanah on Fri Jun 10, 2016 3:12 pm; edited 4 times in total
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Re: CAVANAH, Nadia

on Sat Mar 26, 2016 1:08 pm
I think she's done
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Re: CAVANAH, Nadia

on Sat Mar 26, 2016 3:11 pm
Hi, Nadia!

A couple of things. Please change your user name to Nadia Cavanah, not the name of your playby.

Next, the information you have in her Hogwarts history is mostly information about things that happened to her before she got to Hogwarts. All of that information, except the last 2 or three sentences, belongs up in her Early Years.

In the Hogwarts years, we want to know about what happened to her from age 11 to age 17, while she was in school. Can you edit that please?

And I really don't understand where her desire to become a race car driver comes from. She's returned to the wizarding world but wants to be a race car driver? Since wizards don't drive cars, how is that going to work?

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Re: CAVANAH, Nadia

on Sat Mar 26, 2016 9:59 pm
When I wanted to register I wanted to put only Naida but it was used already so I put last name of pb
I thought admins can only fix that, sorry, I'll do

About Hogwarts, I see that now, give me a couple of minutes and I will edit that

And for riceing, she wasn't tehnically in wizarding world, she lived in Ireland like muggle, that's why I wrote she used magic only when she really need that. If that is okay, I can add that part in history?
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Re: CAVANAH, Nadia

on Sat Mar 26, 2016 10:30 pm
Thanks for fixing the name and for being willing to adjust her history. Now, about the racing, it sounds like she was interested in that when she was living in the muggle world. Yes, that you should put in her history. Maybe that would clear up some of the wording about her return to the wizarding world. In the last line or so of her history, currently, it is a little confusing about what you mean. Are you wanting her to try to live in the wizarding world and use her magic as little as possible, or what exactly are you wanting?

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Re: CAVANAH, Nadia

on Sat Mar 26, 2016 10:32 pm
its better, nadia, but i still need clarification on what you mean in your last sentence of her history. the rest of it looks okay to me, i believe, unless i've missed something. i like to read it completely one last time before i approve.

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Re: CAVANAH, Nadia

on Sat Mar 26, 2016 10:35 pm
No, no, maybe I made mistake because I put that in last line. It's connected with her time spent in Ireland after school and before returning to London. In Ireland she tried to live as muggle, because it's the only way she know
When she was 26 (which means year before now) only then she decided to come back to london and try to be.. well, witch
and I put something about racing for you
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Re: CAVANAH, Nadia

on Sat Mar 26, 2016 10:41 pm
oh. ok. well, that makes a bit more sense. i can tell you're a second language player, and we do welcome them. sometimes, though, english has some odd slang phrases and idioms. when it doesn't seem clear, i'd prefer to just be able to ask you so i'm sure i know exactly what you're saying. certainly not trying to offend.

if i had to choose which house she'd fit in, she seems like she'd fit in a couple different places, but, i think, since you listed Ravenclaw and that would be one of my choices, she should be an ex-Ravenclaw.

i'll accept her and sort her into grads!

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Re: CAVANAH, Nadia

on Sat Mar 26, 2016 10:47 pm
oh did I make that much mistakes? lol
You are right, english is my second language, and I am okay with others asking me what I meant, because, to be honest, sometimes I find it difficult to write on english what I mean but I'm trying to use google translate as less as possible

I'm okay with ravenclaw and thank you Very Happy
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Re: CAVANAH, Nadia

on Sat Mar 26, 2016 10:57 pm
you didn't make that many mistakes, no. but some of our past second language players used to say that google translate sometimes wasn't as accurate with slang and idioms as our players would have liked it to be. but if i know i can just ask if i'm a little confused, then that does help.


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