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on Tue Oct 04, 2011 11:52 pm
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THOMAS, PRISCILLA ARIEL
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INTRODUCTION
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    FULL NAME: Priscilla Ariel Thomas

    NICKNAMES: Ari, Cilla, ReRe, grandfather calls her Princess

    AGE: 12

    ALLEGIANCE: Potter's Army

    HOGWARTS HOUSE: Gryffindor or HufflePuff

    CLASSES: Charms and Potions

    WAND: Willow, Veela Hair, 7 1/2 inches long, very flexible

    PLAY BY: Emerald Angel Young


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APPEARANCE
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    HAIR COLOR: Black

    EYE COLOR: Brown

    HEIGHT: 5'5

    BODY TYPE: Curvy

    GENERAL APPEARANCE: Priscilla has long black hair that, as of now, she has in big curls. She has brown eyes with caramel colored skin. She considers herself the definition of a girl because she loves to do do her nails and her toes and she prefers dresses and skirts to jeans everyday of the week. Shorts are okay to her, sometimes. High heels are also another love of hers.


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PERSONALITY
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    CHARACTER STRENGTHS AND SKILLS:
    Natural affinity for potions, charming, quick thinker

    CHARACTER WEAKNESSES:
    Inability to compromise, Standoffish, Speaks before thinking

    CHARACTER LIKES:
    patience, caring, laughter

    CHARACTER DISLIKES:
    rudeness, arrogance, cruelness

    GOALS:
    Priscilla wants to graduate and go to work for the Ministry. She hopes to find work dealing with charms or potions.

    QUIRKS:
    She has a habit of giggling and talking to herself at random times.

    BOGGART: Being alone, losing all of her family, failing school

    PATRONUS: a Crane (a bird). The first time she and her grandfather snuck into the zoo after hours so she could play with the birds. The Crane was the most fascinating one to her, as it reminded her of herself.

    DEMENTOR: The death of her grandmother, on her 9th birthday

    VERITASERUM: She morphed into her neighbor one day, pulled a prank, someone saw it and the girl got in trouble.

    MIRROR OF ERISED: To become Minister of Magic

    PERSONALITY: Priscilla is a generally shy, laid-back and quiet person. She has a deep love of the arts, particularly dancing and writing. She can come across as cold wen someone meets her but once she considers them a friend, they see a different side of her. She's warm, funny, smart, charming and most surprisingly she loves to pull friendly pranks on others.


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FAMILY & POSSESSIONS
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    FATHER: Zachary Thomas, 42

    MOTHER: Jacquelyn Thomas, 44

    SIBLING(S): None

    OTHER: Grandfather: Dean Thomas

    BLOOD STATUS: Halfblood

    RACE: Human

    SOCIAL STATUS: Middle Class

    PET(S):
    An Owl

    BROOMSTICK():
    None

    OTHER POSSESSIONS:
    (OPTIONAL)


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CHARACTER HISTORY
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    Early Years: She grew up as the only child of Zachary and Jacquelyn in the countryside of England. She's always been reserved, shy and laidback around people that she is not really comfortable or used to be around.She's been in love with Hogwarts for as long as she can remember, listening to her grandfather Dean talk about his days at the school. Once you get to know her, she is an energetic girl that loves to hang out with her friends, do girly things and pull harmless pranks.

    Hogwarts Years: None Yet

    Adulthood: None



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BEHIND THE CHARACTER
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    YOUR NAME: Quitey

    RP EXPERIENCE: 2 years

    HOW YOU FOUND US: searching Free Forums for other RP sites

    OTHER CHARACTERS:

    PURPOSE OF CHARACTER: To become a part of the history of Hogwarts and the Ministry of Magic

    RP SAMPLE:
    Spoiler:
    Priscilla could not believe she was late for her very first Charms class! She hurriedly ran along the hallway, not even taking the time to look around at the beauty of the school as she usually did. The minute she reached the classroom, she slowly walked in and tried to slip into a seat in the back of the classroom. "Well well so glad you could join us Ms. Thomas. I hope you enjoyed your extra time." She felt a blush come across her face as she murmured "I'm sorry professor."

    She ignored the scattered giggles and whispers from her classmates as she made her way to the front of the class to take her seat. As she took her seat she heard someone whisper "Hey RiRi just ignore those guys" she turned her head and saw her friend Natalie sitting behind her. Priscilla nodded her head in agreement and slowly turned back to the front of the class and began to listen to the day's lesson as she promised herself that she wouldn't be late for anymore classes.



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on Wed Oct 05, 2011 12:12 am
You have a really good start on this app, but I have a couple of questions. Halle Berry does not look 12. If you're sure you want your character to be 12, you might want a different PB. Or if you want that particular PB, you might consider making her older.

In your veritserum, you said she and her grandfather played with tigers. How did they manage that? Tigers arent' generally very sociable with humans.

I'd also like to see you finish the personality section. You have a good start on it, but it needs more content. I would like you to do more there.

And your rp sample starts out really well, but then you change the tenses on it. It needs to be written third person, past tense. Can you fix some of those minor things?

And if you need help, just give a shout! BTW, welcome aboard!

k.

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on Wed Oct 05, 2011 2:57 am
Thank you Very Happy & I made the changes to it! Smile and I changed the character
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on Wed Oct 05, 2011 5:20 am
Hi there. I don't mean to intrude, but Khaat, I PM-ed you regarding some confusion here. Just to clarify. (:

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on Wed Oct 05, 2011 5:24 pm
Confusion about my app?
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on Thu Oct 06, 2011 6:19 am
Hi there. (:

The confusion about your app is mostly down to the canon list. The year is 2024 and by this point in time Dean Thomas would have been in his forties and, as you can see above, he has a son, Trenton. With the canon list, Trent was made an only child. That's where the confusion comes in as Priscilla is the grandchild of Dean and unless he was a little bit on the promiscuous side aged two then this can't work. I really do like Priscilla's character and if there is something that could be worked out then by all means, talk to Madd (Trent). If not then perhaps take a look at the canon list and pluck one out to paste this character into.

Sound alright?
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on Mon Oct 17, 2011 11:49 pm
Priscilla, we give members 2 weeks to get your app completed and approved. You are at your 2 week mark. We would like to see this character, with the necessary changes, active and on the boards. Please let us know if we can help you in any way. If we dont' hear from you very soon, we will have to put this character into "storage" until you let us know otherwise. But personally, I'd rather see her up and running.

Let us know if we can help.

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on Tue Oct 25, 2011 2:11 am
moving to graveyard b/c of lack of response.

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on Tue Oct 25, 2011 8:59 pm
Khaat this is the accepted forum! HAHA.
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